TPO2- Do you agree or disagree with the following statements?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people
The argument above asserts that honesty is the best policy in any relationship between people. A simple recognition of the argument lends our discussion to a very significant issue of telling truth can improve our relationship that needs to be summed up. That having been mentioned, I however adhere to this belief that tell truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people for the reasons which will be illustrated at length in the subsequence paragraphs.
First and foremost, the crux of the matter lies in the fact that honesty is the best policy which allows you to not come up excuses. In any relationship there are many secret things which are hard to say truth about them. In simple words, when you say lie to your friend or partner, you should formulate excuses. This makes your relationship harder than before. Maybe your friend or partner make angry or your relationship will break up. Every lie can complicate any relationship. The point that fits this notion is the 6 years relationship between two people who want to marry. But a tiny lie can destroy their marriage. Thus, it goes without saying that tell lie can block your relationship and you should bring excuses to hide your lie.
Aside from telling truth which help your relationship to be constant, we cannot lose our sight on the fact that there are certain cases, in which always speaking truth is not advisable for somebody who is bereaved, telling him the hard reality at that time may put him in to some shock or comma. To put it in apposite words, some people prefer to hear the lie. This is because they lost their confidence if we tell truth to them. Therefore, these kind of truth should be tackled carefully.
To sum up, trust is the most important factor in any relationship. So we should always tell truth in our relationship. But there some cases which tell truth does not work. In this cases, we have not any option.
Comments
I need 25 or 26. How can I
I need 25 or 26. How can I get this score? What are the main problems ?
from the flaws:
from the flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Different Words: 167 200
The main problems are grammatical errors and limited vocabulary words.
You may read a good grammar book and memorize more words.
A simple recognition of the argument lends our discussion to a very significant issue of telling truth can improve our relationship that needs to be summed up.
Description: what is the subject for 'can improve'? can you re-write this sentence?
tell truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people
telling truth is the most important consideration in any relationship among people
Sentence: First and foremost, the crux of the matter lies in the fact that honesty is the best policy which allows you to not come up excuses.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a negator
Suggestion: Refer to to and not
Aside from telling truth which help your relationship
Aside from telling truth which helps your relationship
Sentence: The point that fits this notion is the 6 years relationship between two people who want to marry.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to years and relationship
Sentence: In this cases, we have not any option.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and cases
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Different Words: 167 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 19 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 337 350
No. of Characters: 1557 1500
No. of Different Words: 167 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.285 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.62 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.507 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.85 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.328 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.338 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.503 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.17 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5