TPO31 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people attribute their unhappiness to the rapid change of modern world. In my opinion, I absolutely disagree with this idea and give my vote to the argument that humans are more satisfied with their lives. There are three reasons supporting my view which will be explored in the following essay.
First and foremost, people now have in hand various types of entertainment with the boom of fast changing technology. Low-cost, transcontinental flights help families be able to travel to farther exotic places instead of spending their holidays in domestic spots. Besides, we can search for an extensive range of information on the internet before making the decisions which means that they can avoid unexpected occurrences. Consequently, consumers feel more happy and satisfied. My cousin´s experience exemplifies this idea. He is a frequent traveler and usually looks for details on his preferred destinations through a plenty of travelling websites on the internet. As such, he can find cheap but beautiful hotels or nice restaurants at the destinations. Hence, my cousin is able to enjoy wonderful and memorable voyages.
Secondly, humans get supports with moderate expenses on doing their daily tasks. Therefore, it is less time consuming to finish their basic needs such as cleaning or cooking and people have more free time to spend with their family and friends. My own experience is a compelling example. I spent a few hundred dollars for the washing machine, dish washer and cleaning robot. They have helped me save hours on washing the dishes, clothes and cleaning my house. I can also order various types of delicious food from online food services. As a result, I have some more hours in my busy days to meet my friends and family. This example shows how fast changing world has facilitated our lives.
Last but not least, achievements on medical treatments have not only cured many dangerous diseases which used to be deadly a few decades ago but also tremendously increased public welfare. Therefore, healthy dwellers feel more delighted than ever before.
In conclusion, I understand that the quickly changing world brings us a few drawbacks such as environmental pollution or social conflicts, but my view is that their advantages outweigh their disadvantages due to the abovementioned reasons and examples.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.256 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90276925251 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9176129231 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5909090909 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0454545455 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68181818182 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192325959254 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498570268574 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605545088434 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105843403687 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650696899239 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.