Traffic congestion seems to be increasing. What causes do you think are the causes of it. What solution are come forth to curb it down.
With the rapid development of the society, traffic problems raise up in many cities. Too many cars in streets may cause low efficiency and environmental pollution. In this situation, some people propose that drivers should pay a fee for driving in busy city streets when there is a greatest heavy traffic. However, I disagree with the statement.
First, it is useless to charge the extra fee for efficiency. when a citizen drives his car in a road, it is always that he has chosen the best way to get to his destination. he has found the best way. so many cars in a single road just imply the road is important and brings so much convenience for people dwelling in this city. there was a time that I wanted to go to school but I was late actually. Although I was in a hurry, I chose a busy street instead of others, which was much closer than any other street. it was surely crowded, but it was still the best way for me to school.Even I am asked for extra fee and then I still could not change my ideas because I had to get to school on time. so the policy is not useful and not reasonable to improve efficiency.
Second, more pollution may be caused by this policy. If there are many people deciding to change their way, of course this street will have less stress, but other longer ways will suffer. it is possible that the other ways become crowded and the overall cost for drivers increased. then , cars will release more polluted fumes and lead to more pollution.
Granted, some one may assert that to charge for an extra fee does have its merits. it can surely make some people who do not want to pay for the fee find a road with less car, and thus earn more money for the government. Nevertheless, the money itself should be used to improve the traffic in the city instead of from causing more problems for the city.
Since all discussions above, even having some benefits, the statement is not so reasonable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, still, then, thus, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50564971751 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40338648864 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522598870056 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2761022049 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.75 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0563005915312 0.236089414692 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0209841275488 0.076458572812 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405149965315 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0365832699766 0.150856017488 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315678693186 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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