In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are todays.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
... environment, on their health, and so on,, more than now. Be accustomed to cars an...
^^
Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'prefer'
Suggestion: prefer
...tination makes people lazy so that they prefers cars as an alternative for walking to r...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 636, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...mpany that I work now, recently is held a educational course concerning global wa...
^
Line 3, column 736, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this phenomenon' or 'these phenomena', 'these phenomenons'?
Suggestion: this phenomenon; these phenomena; these phenomenons
...hange and factors that can badly affect these phenomenon including the excessive use of cars. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...rtation will improve to the extent that this systems will be preferable than persona...
^^^^
Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the manufacturers') or simply say ''some manufacturers''.
Suggestion: some of the manufacturers; some manufacturers
...n personal cars. According to the news, some of manufacturers are working on special kinds of trains ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...ains that can reach to very high speed. Besides they pay attention to design them more ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 277.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17689530686 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02968324549 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584837545126 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5656644627 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.307692308 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264590384364 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952030473124 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780896537163 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165426762009 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535631171044 0.0645574589148 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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