at universities and college, sports and other social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
The distributing budgets in educational agencies, like universities is one of the most important topics. universities have some facilities companion their educational spaces. some scholar believes that some extra activities, sports, social activities, for instance, are as much important as universities educational purposes and should acquire as much financial support as universities academic facilities. In my Opinion financial credit should be divided equally into both extra activities and academic activities and I agree with the statement mentioned in the questions. the following sentences will elaborate on this opinion.
First, it is needless to say that the universities most important duties is to educate special people with special and specific knowledge and ability to take a rule in society, definitely, this will require equipped classes, laboratories, libraries, etc. Regardless of this, studying is not the only aspect of life and one human needs other activities in their personal life. extra activities like sports, social activities, etc will provide students a happy life and time which can increase their efficiency in their professional career. if these facilities receive sufficient financial support, all students could benefit these extra activities. Participating in these additional sides of educational activities will increase the feeling of joy and inherent happiness of students which increase the student learning power.
Scientist proves that exercising and involving in social activities release endorphins hormone which provides more happiness and improve persons psychological conditions.
Second, it is worth noting that, the university is not just a place to educate and prepare students for industry or a professional job, although it is a place which should develop and flourish each students aspect of characterizations. if the universities financial affair department, just devote the budget to the academical purposes, one-dimensional students are one of its consequences. nowadays society needs multidisciplinary persons and each student with knowledge of multi things could have a significant influence on their life and society.
this just could be done by enough attention to the other aspects other than educational spaces. and should spent the financial source equally to both sports and educational parts. this kind of action can also flourish other talents of the students, for instance, may some students in biology field have some talents in managing or sports activities which could be emerged by existing the suitable environment.
to sum up, as the universities should prepare students for multi-aspect of life and studying certain field is not the only aim of the universities. it is very important to draw the universities attention to the other extra activities, and also these kind of activities are necessary for students life-style and improve their efficiency,
So I advocating that sports and social activities in the universities are as important as classes and libraries and should receive the same financial support.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2639.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73695652174 4.8611393121 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14746199552 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463043478261 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 843.3 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.6246371206 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.894736842 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2105263158 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324322531289 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101446883599 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959611523086 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200631542687 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164821213729 0.0645574589148 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 58.1214874552 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 10.9000537634 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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