What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
Every person must respect his mother and his father, is a common quality that all good sons have. No matter what our parents have done before, above all they are our parents. By the way, I was educated to think like that. Nowadays, I realize that the education of kids has changed a lot and essential qualities like respect is getting down, the pity of all it is that people are getting used to act like.
Respect it is the most important one, but there are other qualities needed to be a good son: like patience, complicity, attention, goodness and love. A good child usually never forget all your parents have done for him. Unfortunately, these qualities are getting lost these days and I fell so upset when I see a son act with rudeness about their parents. Unfortunately, it is not rarely to see these scenes, I feel scared about it. For instance, I was in the supermarket with my mom and I saw a kid about seven years old, beating up his mom because he wants to buy something in there. I was astonishing and could not believe in what I was seeing in front of mine. Mainly, about the reaction of the mother, she acted like: - Okay, okay we will buy what do you want. Unhappiness, this is not an isolate situation, things like that been happened by all the time around the world.
Personally, I love my parents. And I want to take care of them, right now and especially when they will get old. I really would like to do what they did about me when I was a kid. They give me love, attention and mostly they give me education. I guess that I learned to be a good daughter and my mom and daddy loves me. But I need to confess that thinking about to have a son I feel afraid because I am terrifying about behavior changes that been happen with kids last days.
Love is essential and if we put it in mind, sure we will be a good son or daughter. And our parents will have the children they deserved. Thus, I keep in mind that respect and love can provide all the good feeling.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ed to think like that. Actually, I have been realizing that nowadays the education of kids has...
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Line 2, column 793, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... do you want. Unhappiness, this is not an isolate situation, things like that been happen...
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Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...ifying about behavior changes that been happen with kids last days. Love is essentia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, really, so, thus, for instance, i feel, i guess, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2962962963 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37880905803 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529100529101 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4808099773 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190398568965 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544796309914 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497029018864 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115249383843 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446636006721 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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