What is the most important animal in your country? Why is the animal important? Use reasons and specific details to explain your answer.
Pets play an essential part of people's lives in different countries. Some countries take care of home domestic animals such as dogs, cats, and birds. Others, process farm animals such as cows, sheep, and horses. As far as I am concerned, I think in my country the dog is the most important animal for 90% of families. It is a great companion, also it is the guide for people with disability people and plays an instrumental role as the home guard. Following is a brief explanation of my idea.
First of all, most elderly individuals spend their time alone. Unfortunately, our daily lives as young adults always keep us away from visiting our parents and our relative or even spending time with our kids. Furthermore, dogs are our best friends. They are faithful and smart animals. Thus, they obey our orders without any complaining. People these days need those friends and take care of them as they are their children. Moreover, research at the University of Ohio studied cases of people who lived alone for ten years. The study compared them to those who share their living with dogs; the study states that 78% of those seniors who live alone are fill with stress and unstable feelings attempting to suicide, while those among dogs are live longer with hope and happiness. For example, my neighbor Joe, he is 82 years old, he lives alone for twenty years, but that old man has three dogs, every day take them for a walk and play with them, he calls them my babies.
Secondly, as I said above, dogs are very intelligent animals, we can train them in the way they can understand us and help humans in many ways. Such as working as detectives they have very powerful smell sense, they can also guide blind people or help firefighters. Nowadays blind people can ultimately depend on their service dogs in their transportation; they are their eyes. For example, I remember at the subway a blind old lady with her service dog. He helped her to ride the train and notified her when the door opened. It was like a magic to animals with that intelligence and cooperative for their masters.
Least but not the last, we can use dogs such as shepherd dogs to protect our properties from thieves, they can park a loud and notify with their noise the neighbors and terrify the thieves. For example, my cousin; James, spends most of his time out of the city. He has one smart dog. One day he protected his house from a huge planned robbery. He parked and bite them so hard and everybody in the neighborhood recognized that noise and called the 911 so, he saved the house and his property.
All in all, in my country, dogs are our friends our guides and our guards. We respect them and love them as they are our family members.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 28 15
No. of Words: 487 350
No. of Characters: 2160 1500
No. of Different Words: 253 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.698 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.435 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.289 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 116 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 85 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.393 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.752 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.258 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.449 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.166 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'i think', 'such as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252268602541 0.229887763892 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.123411978221 0.158761421928 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0689655172414 0.0866891130778 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.043557168784 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.125226860254 0.0685040099705 183% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.117967332123 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.010889292196 0.0351676179071 31% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.39939782216 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00907441016334 0.0309702414327 29% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.070780399274 0.0887237588012 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010889292196 0.0209618222197 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00725952813067 0.0139019557991 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2715.0 2387.08602151 114% => OK
No of words: 487.0 408.028673835 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5749486653 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.256673511294 0.338922669872 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.186858316222 0.251872472559 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.133470225873 0.174417080927 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0759753593429 0.112833075102 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39939782216 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52977412731 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 63.3213114295 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 17.3928571429 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6249242571 48.84282405 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9642857143 120.699889404 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3928571429 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.535714285714 0.644075263715 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 36.078688765 45.7405998639 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.30434782609 1.45489161554 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210866484154 0.300154397459 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117837969984 0.103427244359 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0613388497012 0.0752933317313 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.415737928214 0.497263757937 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151052677147 0.151897553556 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620717267117 0.114077575197 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068768298513 0.0781384742642 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.253942629495 0.336927656856 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0511540999517 0.067059652881 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136154523197 0.210909579961 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064544481694 0.0618886996521 104% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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