What is the most important factor that affect the lasting time of a friendship?
help each other at difficult time
have same interests
trust each other completely
Currently, living in the society full of fierce competition, there is a propensity that a bunch of individuals have preference for choosing their friends or maintaining friendship, some of them reckon that sharing the same interests is their first priority, while others contend that they prefer to take into trusting into their consideration. Personally speaking, I can hardly concur with the listed opinions and I harbor the idea that helping each other at difficult time is the most significant factor affecting my lasting time of friendship for reasons as follows.
To start with, helping with each other lays a solid foundation for maintaining friendship. To be more specific, during the process of establishing relationship, it is extremely difficult for us to tell whether the person is worthy of making acquaintance with based on what I can see superficially, because of which, the properties of helping or their behaviors of reaching out their hands to me when I am in trouble are what can truly reflects their qualities. In addition, helping with each other also plays a vital role in maintaining the friendship. Provided that a friend stands by instead of offering me a hand to help me out of dilemma, I am likely to pause this friendship since I devote wholeheartedly to help him or her and I deserve equal commitment toward me. Concretely, in a relationship with friends, due to individuals’ instinct of devote, they are likely to convey their friendliness toward each other, including helping friends with problems confronted with them, meanwhile individuals also possesses the desire of being helped or loved, for this reason of satisfied desire, the friendship can last for a long time period.
What’s more, helping with each other also contributes to friends’ topics. During the time confronted with varieties of troubles, individuals tend to memorize the shared experience, including how one friend comforted us, how smart they were to help us come us with efficient approaches to address issues and things like that. Therefore, after experiencing the dilemma, each time friends are reminded of the memorable experience, friends recall their relationship and can help in marveling at how determined their friendship is, which constitutes a stepping stone in underpinning their long-lasting relationship. For instance, one of my best friends, Rebecca, helped me during the period of making preparation for the college entrance exams. Now, both of us are admitted by top universities located in different provinces, but distance does not exert detrimental effects on our friendship, each time we recall our shared experience in high school, we have lots of intriguing affairs to talk with each other, including words she once told me to comfort me, harsh disciplines implemented by our teachers and so on, which contributes to maintaining our friendship despite of our long distance and divergent majors.
Admittedly, possessing same interests also has its perks in maintaining friendship, owing to its function in engage a large number of topics to talk about. But as time goes by, individuals’ interests are easily changed, especially in nowadays society full of diversified newly-emerging affairs, thus the friendship based on same interests cannot last for a long time. With regard to trusting each other completely, trust cannot be erected without a solid foundation in a relationship, which indicates that in order to pursue long-lasting friendship, the first step is to reach out our hands to friends so as to build trust gradually.
In a nutshell, from what has been discussed above, the most crucial factor in maintaining a long-lasting friendship is helping with each other, owing to the effects exerted on achieving intentional satisfaction and engaging more intriguing topics through the shared experience in tackling problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 435, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'reflect'
Suggestion: reflect
...when I am in trouble are what can truly reflects their qualities. In addition, helping w...
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Line 2, column 743, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to equal'
Suggestion: to equal
...rtedly to help him or her and I deserve equal commitment toward me. Concretely, in a ...
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Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ndship, owing to its function in engage a large number of topics to talk about. But as time goes ...
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Line 4, column 236, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...nterests are easily changed, especially in nowadays society full of diversified newly-emerg...
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Line 4, column 607, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ep is to reach out our hands to friends so as to build trust gradually. In a nutshell, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, in addition, to start with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 108.0 52.1666666667 207% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3269.0 1977.66487455 165% => OK
No of words: 611.0 407.700716846 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35024549918 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97176167858 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14633464166 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 304.0 212.727598566 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497545008183 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 980.1 618.680645161 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.1344086022 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.101657572 48.9658058833 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 204.3125 100.406767564 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.1875 20.6045352989 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327783987328 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137646136855 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956044686781 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219192790647 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418054334265 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 11.7677419355 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 58.1214874552 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 86.8835125448 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.0537634409 171% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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