When famous people such as actors, athletes and rock stars give their opinions, many people listen. Do you think we should pay attention to these opinions? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue that whether we must attention so much on celebrities’ opinions or not, some people agree with this idea that celebrities have a crucial role in the society, so their opinion is effective. However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reasons.
first and the most important reason is that well-known people are role models for many people across the world. In fact, they usually have the strong personality and can encourage people, especially juveniles to improve their character. People can learn of them to focus on their aims, discipline, and ignore some one who says it is not possible. In addition, people can learn to accept constructive criticisms and use them for improve their personality. I think that there is not a better instance than Cristiano Ronaldo, who is a former football player for Manchester United. He was lived in a poor family in small town, while this did not impede him to forget his great ambitious. He left home when he was just a child to gain better chance for improving his football skills, which he believed it. Eventually, regular practice and many efforts made him a great athlete in the world, who inspires million of people around the world for having a health life.
A further point we must consider is that famous people can use of their reputation for attract people’s attention on crucial subjects. I think that a small example can give some light on this matter. As we all know, we now are facing with a horrible crisis that can menace human survival, which is called the global warming. Increasing amounts of certain gases such as carbon dioxide into atmosphere enhance Earth temperature. It may dose not seems a adverse events in a short time, while it will brings many negative impacts on environment like melting ice caps, changing climate, bringing long droughts. So, celebrities can easily attract people’s attention on the global warming and its consequences, and encourage them to help governments for decreasing green house gases. They can convince people to use public transportation instead of private cars, or other plan which is design for this aim.
All above evidence supports this undeniable fact that famous people encourage people to make more efforts and draw their attention on important issue. Of course, we can hear their opinion, while we are one who must decide about them according to our experience, information, and intelligence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: First
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...s on their aims, discipline, and ignore some one who says it is not possible. In additio...
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...reat athlete in the world, who inspires million of people around the world for having a...
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...arth temperature. It may dose not seems a adverse events in a short time, while i...
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...rature. It may dose not seems a adverse events in a short time, while it will brings m...
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Suggestion: bring
...e events in a short time, while it will brings many negative impacts on environment li...
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...ther plan which is design for this aim. All above evidence supports this undenia...
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...erience, information, and intelligence.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'of course', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233954451346 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.146997929607 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101449275362 0.0866891130778 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0393374741201 0.046263068375 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0786749482402 0.0685040099705 115% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111801242236 0.118717715034 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0227743271222 0.0351676179071 65% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72805848804 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0207039337474 0.0309702414327 67% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0724637681159 0.0887237588012 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0289855072464 0.0209618222197 138% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0207039337474 0.0139019557991 149% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2565.0 2387.08602151 107% => OK
No of words: 425.0 408.028673835 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.03529411765 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.367058823529 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254117647059 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174117647059 0.174417080927 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117647058824 0.112833075102 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72805848804 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569411764706 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 68.0219121832 59.2087087015 115% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2380952381 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3550482632 48.84282405 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 120.699889404 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2380952381 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.644075263715 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 45.649859944 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.390625 1.45489161554 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260805232045 0.300154397459 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0748587609508 0.103427244359 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0625763116481 0.0752933317313 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.43047682216 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123309326043 0.151897553556 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888702240091 0.114077575197 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603036547953 0.0781384742642 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.295513606932 0.336927656856 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0340791943653 0.067059652881 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181223635762 0.210909579961 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402897160634 0.0618886996521 65% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.