TPO-33 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects.Use spe

In today's world working in a group is highly acceptable and fashionable than working alone. When it comes in a project, working in a group is beneficial. Working alone is tiresome as it takes lots of afford to complete the task by only one person. As far as i m concerned, working in a group has several advantages like less stress, massive creativity and less possibility of delusion in projects.

First of all, while working in a group there is a division of task into many people which will help people to boost the confident in themselves. But doing the same project will adds lots of responsibility to single person which in turn creates anxious, stress and nervous. For example, in a project there are several things to do like collecting information, making charts, survey and presentations. Working in group will help in reducing the stress and time which will create a peaceful environment in people's mind. Also, division of schedules in different people will give them time to think in a creative way.

Additionally, When there will be many students included in a project there will be more variations in work. Different people have different imaginations. Hence, there will be abundance amount of innovation which adds beauty in a project. For example, people have different idea and summing up those idea will give advantage to the project in getting good grades. But, when there is a single person than there is lack of creativity and new ideas as it has only one mind to think and create. More people will also adds in degrading the errors.

Finally, many people will have more time to look into the project and find out their mistakes in a project. As there are distinct faculty of different people in a project which will help them to focus on their own and correct them. For an instance, many people will look into the project with variety of ways which will indeed helps to look at the project in non-identical ways and find mistakes. Thus, there will be less chances of fallacy in assignment.

In conclusion, team work is always preferable to individual work. In groups there will be less stress in people, more freedom to think in different ways and less numbers of misconceptions.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'add'
Suggestion: add
...selves. But doing the same project will adds lots of responsibility to single person...
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Line 3, column 595, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a creative way" with adverb for "creative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ent people will give them time to think in a creative way. Additionally, When there will be ma...
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Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this idea' or 'those ideas'?
Suggestion: this idea; those ideas
...ople have different idea and summing up those idea will give advantage to the project in g...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind thinking'.
Suggestion: mind thinking
...tivity and new ideas as it has only one mind to think and create. More people will also adds ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 513, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'add'
Suggestion: add
...think and create. More people will also adds in degrading the errors. Finally, ma...
^^^^
Line 7, column 418, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... and find mistakes. Thus, there will be less chances of fallacy in assignment. In...
^^^^
Line 9, column 158, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun numbers is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... freedom to think in different ways and less numbers of misconceptions.
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, look, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82631578947 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68833017198 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7724235605 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0952380952 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80952380952 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172959224662 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671157722524 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533522542482 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113786059073 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456769506042 0.0645574589148 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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