In today's world, there is a trend of advertising the company's product by using several method to persuade people in buying theirs goods. Television advertising is one of the common promotions dedicating to different groups of people according to the television program. In my opinion, there should not be any television advertising directed towards young children which hamper's their mental stability and peaceful nature.
At my first blush, young children prefer to watch television because of several animated cartoons like poke-mon, PJ masks, ninja etc. They love magic and different graphics used in televisions, and the advertising company use this preference of children to advertise their goods. For example, many company signed with the cartoon program in order to portray their ads at the same time the cartoon program launched. As a result, young children beg their parents to buy the same toy they advertise in their promotions.
Admittedly, young people are at the developing phase of their life, and they do not have the mature sense to decide which is right or wrong for them. They are innocence and adapt to the surrounding in which they are raised. Even with the adverse effect with that promotions, the manager and company's people decided to advertise their products. For supporting instances, some ads are about the fast food which in result cause obesity and other problem related to health of the younger people. Thus, advertising should not be directed towards the younger people.
In fact, the young people try to imitate the same style that is shown in the ads, thereby resulting accident. For example, in many ads the superman is flying in the sky and jumping through the walls. These innocent people attempt to copy those acts which emerged into large disaster in children's life. Though the company gets benefited by doing the advertise for younger people, they should avoid it as far as possible.
From the aforementioned views, I personally feel television ads diverted to younger people should be ceased as soon as possible as there are many harmful affect resulted by those ads.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun method seems to be countable; consider using: 'several methods'.
Suggestion: several methods
...vertising the companys product by using several method to persuade people in buying theirs goo...
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Line 7, column 346, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ugh the company gets benefited by doing the advertise for younger people, they should avoid i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, thus, for example, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14492753623 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57223146532 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539130434783 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1921210397 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.411764706 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203584402913 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749297371853 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064777546152 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120836220308 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494321717457 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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