TPO-20 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

From Ancient to present days, victory is only accomplish if you have dared to attempt risk in your life. Also, in studying the biography and auto-biography of numerous successful people in present day refer their success as a result of continuous hard-work and taking risk. As far as i m concerned, heterodox bid and headstrong belief in taking risk define success in successful people's life as they love taking risk for lesson, recreational purpose and social evolution.

First of all, people who strive on trifle things brings' the same result and people who aims risk might cause harm and failure but eventually ensue success. Successful people learns from their mistake. Moreover, they also get encouraged and motivated in seeking adventure in life. Every successful people have a sad story lags behind him as he experiments his life with risk. He might gets fail but he learns lesson which will always stay in his mind as a tempting clock not to repeat the same mistake again. For example, I had taken a risk in endeavoring a new project which was not consider by professor as topic, as a result it was not accepted by my teacher but he applaud me in front of all student in attempting new research in class. In trying risk might not spark a good result but will adds a path for further success in life.

Secondly, Prosperous people love recreational activities. People has interest in taking fun and excitement while trialing risk and adventure. Doing different things is also fun and exciting as nobody knows what's the consequences it brings'. We can learn variety of different things and experience precious moment which are of course lacks in daily life routine. For an instance, most of the successful people are humorous as they exercised their mind and thinking ability with fun and adventure which in turn motivate them to focus on their project.

Finally, successful people as by trying risk reinforce them seek innovation of social evolution, if they had not effort of taking risk than there might not have developed technologies in world. For example, Brother Wright's attempt to fly on sky by taking a risk of their own life for the first time which add reward to the evolutionary change in world. Thus, taking risk is a manifestation of success.

In conclusion, Successful people were never got victory if they had not thought beyond one's mind which is venturing risk in life. Hence, taking risk in life is very useful as it helps people for gaining life-long lesson, fun and social evolution.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...endeavoring a new project which was not consider by professor as topic, as a result it w...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'applauds'.
Suggestion: applauds
...t was not accepted by my teacher but he applaud me in front of all student in attemptin...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'add'
Suggestion: add
... might not spark a good result but will adds a path for further success in life. ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...s also fun and exciting as nobody knows whats the consequences it brings. We can lear...

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, of course, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90398126464 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63172461985 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508196721311 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5362736332 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.7 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.35 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220445175502 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777627877461 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431068478683 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136013456421 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230349880919 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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