Which character can be valuable to teach children from ages 5-10 years: 1: being honest 2: being helpful
hectic life has a tremendous impact on people's lives, especially children. They should be helping others in order to survive in their life. From my vantage point, I believe that helping others has a massive influence in children for the following reasons.
To begin with, children can build their personalities by helping other peers. They will learn many things beacuse they will have many friends. For instance, when I was in elamentry school, I was liking to help my classmates. I was very good in a math and science. When any student need help, I did not histate to explain for him and help him in solve his assignment. As a result, I have too many friends. When my birthday came, they suraprise me by making a big party and bringing a gifts to me. By cooperating and collaborating I had many friends and a good personality.Helping other had a positive influence on my behavior by increasing my confidance and making me happy. On the other hand, unhelpful student will not have many friends because he dose not assist others. Moreover, having few friends might have a negative impact on a child's health by causing loneliness. staying alone could has a deleterious effect on kid personality. Therefore, assisting other classmates has a tremendous impact on child personality.
Finally, assisting others has a positive effect on children's future. Helping other peers is dispensable merit and all individuals like this behaviors. For instance, my brother was a very helpful child in his school. When he graduated and got hire, he continued to assist other employees in his work. His colleagues liked him and his behaviors. Also, His director noticed his personality because he was lovely person. Therefore, he raised his position in the work by hiring him as a manager and giving him a high salary. He enhanced his job position by helping co-workers. Furthermore, he enhanced his lifestyle and future by assisting others. However, uncooperate people will lose the opportunity to have a perfect work position because they will stay unknown by other co-workers. Consequently, helping others has a big effect on a child's future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hectic
hectic life has a tremendous impact on peoples...
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Line 6, column 192, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ance, when I was in elamentry school, I was liking to help my classmates. I was very good ...
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Line 6, column 380, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...im in solve his assignment. As a result, I have too many friends. When my birthda...
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Line 6, column 483, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a gift' or simply 'gifts'?
Suggestion: a gift; gifts
...e me by making a big party and bringing a gifts to me. By cooperating and collaborating...
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Line 6, column 573, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Helping
...had many friends and a good personality.Helping other had a positive influence on my be...
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Line 6, column 751, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'doses'.
Suggestion: doses
...t will not have many friends because he dose not assist others. Moreover, having few...
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Line 6, column 875, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Staying
... a childs health by causing loneliness. staying alone could has a deleterious effect on...
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Line 6, column 895, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...causing loneliness. staying alone could has a deleterious effect on kid personality...
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Line 9, column 136, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...pensable merit and all individuals like this behaviors. For instance, my brother was...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05367231638 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94631685001 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502824858757 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7299482422 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8076923077 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6153846154 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.34615384615 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0883408521583 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287770338224 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432921456224 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880110196873 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663778848306 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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