Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Our life has become more sophisticated compared before especially with the advance of technology. from my vantage point, I believe that student should be more organize in order to survive in this life for the following reasons.
To begin with, youngest should arrange their time wisely to acheive their goals. For instance, I am studing in college and working for part time in order to have enough money to help my parents in tutions fee. They could not aford to pay for me and my brother due to having a lot of commitments like pay for rent, bills, health insurance, car insuranceand, entertenment etc. As a result, I am working in weekend to help them. i should orgnise my time very well to handle all my tasks and accomplish my missions. On the other hand, Before 4 decades when my father was student. he did not do any thing just studyed. every thing at that time was a cheap. he spent his weekend with his family and performed his hoppies becuse he had a lot of free time. Consequently, young people sould orgnize their life to acomplish thier duties becuse increase our life commetments.
In addition, Increasing student resposiblities impose for them to mange their time very good. For instance, In the ancient time, most people worked in their farm like my grandfather, when he finished his work , he came back to his resisdent place. He did have duties to do. he spent his time with his family and take arest in his home. In oppose to me , When I finish my job and college class, I should come back to my compus and studying, surffing internet, watching tv to follow world news, perpare food for next day and arrange my room etc. I should handle my time wisely in order to success im my life and accomplish my coal in my life due to our life has become more complex than before. Consequenlty, Young student
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60122699387 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53734011989 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542944785276 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.7269552969 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9473684211 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1578947368 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128643594388 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472265658857 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328673903432 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106117390541 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00685061242038 0.0645574589148 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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