Some people believe that it is important to follow traditions even if they conflict with their beliefs, other believe individual preferences are important than traditions.
Hectic life has a tremendous impact in our life. Some individual like to follow traditions' belief eventhough it may have a negative influence in their life. From my vantage point, I believe that humans should pursue their preferences for the following reasons.
To begin with, following a preferences by populations can improve their futur. They could progress their life in many realms. For instance, I am from Iraq. My countery has many different traditions than others countery. girls should stay with their parents till get mariad. When I was student, I got a great opportunity to study dentistry in another city. Firestly, my parents did not accept this idea. I tried to talk with them over and over again. Finally, they like this idea. I studied and finish my college with a high grade. living in a far distance hepl me to improve my futur. On the other hand, if I stayed with my parents and following my country traditions, I could not progress and develope myself.
Secondly, being different from other people could assist individuals to build their personality. For example, in my country, if young people follow their traditions, these behaviors could have deletrious impact on their life. Some young individuals should get marid on a teenage. They depend on their family in every things. They still live with thier family even after get maryd. As a result, young people do not have strong personality and estamina to face life's difficalties. On the other hand, living independently could help young people to improve their life. They will start to work early and could to handle many tasks in young age.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many
...stance, I am from Iraq. My countery has many different traditions than others countery. girls ...
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Suggestion: Girls
...ferent traditions than others countery. girls should stay with their parents till get...
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Suggestion: Living
...nd finish my college with a high grade. living in a far distance hepl me to improve my...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 272.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99632352941 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58649831003 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551470588235 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3476927177 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.0869565217 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8260869565 20.6045352989 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.17391304348 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286240693986 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777345015692 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643201127495 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197080589331 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326862415001 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 58.1214874552 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.83 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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