Do you agree or disagree with the following idea and why? the people always solve their problems by themself with the help of a family without the government's help?
Hectic life has a tremendous impact on people needed. people may face many urgent events. From my vantage points, I beleive that individuals need government's help in hard situations for the following reasons.
To begin with, people can not face some urgent cases. They need government support to assist them. For instance, now, all people in the world is in crisis because Corona virus. Many individuals left their jobs in order to protect themself. They do not have income bacause they do not have work. In United States, the government help people by giving them monthly payments to help them to pay their rent, pills, and insurance. Thus, the government is giving food help for families, who have children. people could not afford this crisis alone. Also, any person can not depend on his family because his family can not support him. All families live in the same situations. As a result, in some case government should help population in order to survive.
Finally, governments help people with their commitments. Workers, today, have many responsibilties to perform beside their work. Young people should pay many things baside their studying. For instance, I am a student. I pay a lot of money for my college and rent. Also, I have two kids. The government helps me in paying for my health's insurance. I can not afford to pay for my kids' insurance. On the other hand, my family is helping me in paying tuitions fees. I can not ask them more. Without government paid, my children might do not have health insurance. Consequently, government help can help people in many commitments that our family can not afford it.
To wrap it up, in some cases people can not survive without government's help. People can face many dificalties
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, if, may, so, thus, for instance, as a result, in some cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94932432432 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58683868581 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510135135135 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.1344086022 50% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7250969336 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.3214285714 100.406767564 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.5714285714 20.6045352989 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303238812115 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863865437435 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825976208654 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197656215667 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475893816826 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 58.1214874552 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.25 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.0537634409 60% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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