In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Our life has become more advanced as compared to before. we might face many troubles that our parents do not have experience in handle dealing with them. From my vantage point, I believe that today many of youngster is making their decisions independently for the following reasons.
To begin with, many young individuals could depend on technology to have perfect information. For instance, when I finished high school, I depend on myself on choosing my college. I used the internet to look at which specialist was convenient, had a good income, a good future after graduation. All that information Icould get it from an internet website. i could not depend on my parents on making decisions about this subject because they have limited information in the advancing world. In opposition to my father, he could not make anything without asking my grandparent Due to their life was not sophisticated at that time. Everything was easy and their life did not have diverse types of problems, work.
Finally, young individuals are growing up independently. For instance, many students today are studying and working In order to help their parents with tuitions fee that make them more independent and help them to build their personalities and make them behave wisely because they have good opportunities to face life difficulties. In addition, Most of the students live on the campus in order to stay near their college and to save transportation fees. As a result, students live far from their families. therefore, they make their decision by ownself because they depend on their decision in most of the daily task. On the other hand, before many decad young people could not perform any mission without asking their parents even in wearing their clothes. they depended completely on their families. consequently, change in the lifestyle of youngsters impose them to depend on themself on their decision.
To wrap it up, for all aforesaid reasons, young individuals depend on their opinion because of technology is advanced and juveniles grow independently
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, if, look, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15820895522 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83474292159 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528358208955 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9297490194 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9473684211 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6315789474 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38861713258 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112430114729 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797933985796 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221873236536 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106395317514 0.0645574589148 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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