In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives
Yores back to recent days humans are been changing, evolving and moreover updating their demeanors in several realms of pragmatic life. Not ony with the change in pattern of their agriculture, with adoption of new technology people have made a paradigm shift in learning and inculcating aspects. I strongly and abysmally accede with the statement that youngsters are better able now in their private lives in decision making comared to past times where few amongst several reasons are been mentioned below.
For making a first reason, recently grown infrastructures and education system has invariably fostered peoples life, advanced them far enough to decide on their on life. Discussing about academic realms people are making them auto-didactic, shrewd increasing remarkably their fortitude and congnition. And it goes without saying such fortitude, certainly butresses one's contemplating power to deal with people. We cannot ignore that such ability gained over significant use of learning applications like YouTube and Google can deliver such shred people in to their career apogee rather than a fiasco. Similarly, humans have also updated and installed deluge of skills nuance by nuance in apropos to dependence with their parents in decision making subject.
For the second reason, technology and network on every people's hand has enabled people to connect in day to day life bringing the whole world in to a hand carrying gadgets. For example they can meet an ocean of people with the help of applications like Google Map. The remarkably developing and rapidly changing ambience around is a pious boon of transfer of technology; its been like a panacea to human civilization in modern days. Moreover, youngter these days are so mature on their private life as we can see for instance, a 17/18 years old couple are having a brilliant plan for their marital life. Sometimes I feel appalled by seeing them, how can somebody be so mature and make exquisite decision about their life and they are making their life successful. I wasn't much matured when I was on their age. Isn't the technology has brought people together and rendered them to take astute decisions in their life? Doesn't the networking has curtailed time of people who stay at their own resident, rather than meeting personally? It is not easy to deny .
In a nutshell, people in young days rarely rely on their parents to make their own decisions because of rapidly evolving technology and education system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, similarly, so, for example, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2082.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16625310174 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66895049329 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578163771712 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.900900252 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3888888889 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44096921027 0.236089414692 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132633935033 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997399226318 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292408213496 0.150856017488 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646826086769 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.