Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Television programs have a tremendous impact on humans' life. They could enhance folk's life in many realms. From my vantage point, I believe that television has a positive impact on population for the following reasons.
To begin with, Television could enhance individuals' information. For instance, many channels have a update knowledege that could improve people's information about different subjects like national giography. Some of these subjects have many purposes for people. For instance. when I am board, I watch these chanal to have fun. In addition, it help me to be aware of natural disaster and dangerous animals. Last week, I saw a program about shap of poisining snake in the forest and how people could protect their life when they face to these type of creatures. These information are very crucial for everyone. Now, I could easily recognize type of snakes from their color and shape of line in their body.
In addition, Tv programes could improve our health by displaying a discussion programs. For example, My mother have high blood pressure and blood suger because she follow a wrong lifestyle. Recently, she saw doctor phile program. She followed his instruction and advice. This program helps my mother to eat healthy and perform a cardiac exercies to improve her health. Thus, she collects a lot of information from people's experience, who are meeting and asking dr. phile. All that have a positive influence in her life because she changes her lifestyle. Also, Some of programs give us important information about weather. These information could save our life. For example, Last week, I decided to go to ride a boat with my friend but when I followed the forecast program. It says the weather will become too rainy. This information saves my life because it is too dangerous to go to the beach in the bad weather.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...on programs have a tremendous impact on humans life. They could enhance folks life in ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ation. For instance, many channels have a update knowledege that could improve pe...
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Line 4, column 276, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...many purposes for people. For instance. when I am board, I watch these chanal to hav...
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Line 4, column 286, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'boarded'.
Suggestion: boarded
...ses for people. For instance. when I am board, I watch these chanal to have fun. In a...
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Line 4, column 301, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this chanal' or ''?
Suggestion: this chanal;
... For instance. when I am board, I watch these chanal to have fun. In addition, it help me to...
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Line 4, column 343, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ese chanal to have fun. In addition, it help me to be aware of natural disaster and ...
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Line 4, column 560, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'These informations'?
Suggestion: This information; These informations
...n they face to these type of creatures. These information are very crucial for everyone. Now, I c...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'follows'.
Suggestion: follows
...od pressure and blood suger because she follow a wrong lifestyle. Recently, she saw do...
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Line 7, column 623, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'These informations'?
Suggestion: This information; These informations
...us important information about weather. These information could save our life. For example, Last ...
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Line 7, column 695, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... life. For example, Last week, I decided to go to ride a boat with my friend but ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01954397394 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66347152675 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557003257329 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9537062287 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.347826087 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.39130434783 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0805048442855 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254160193218 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029210070332 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659777132116 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017891806555 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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