Which factor do you think is the most important factor for a student’s success in university study?
A university tutor’s individual instructions to help the student to solve problems with schoolwork
The encouragement from family members and friends
The high-quality education from excellent teachers in high school
Facing an increasingly competitive job market, university students are striving to achieve academic and interpersonal excellences nowadays. There is no denial that many factors play their own roles in a university student’s success, such as university tutor’s instructions on school work, encouragement from families, and high-quality education from excellent teachers in high school. However, among all contributors, instructions and guides from a university tutor stands out as the most important factor due to the following reasons:
To begin with, assistances from a university tutor are the most accessible and reliable resources within a university student’s reach. For example, when puzzled with schoolwork, a university student can simply make an appointment with or directly call his or her tutor for help. And modern universities have almost all established policies and facilities to ensure that students’ outcries be answered by tutors in a timely manner. A university student will save time and efforts seeking help from tutors.
Also, don’t forget the fact that nobody understands a student’s academic needs more deeply than university tutors. The tutors have been guiding and instructing students from their first days in university, thus thoroughly knowing what they need to do to achieve success in university study. For example, a tutor can not only help students on their schoolwork, but also point out directions to which they are supposed to put efforts in. With such professional and tailored instructions, a student is 猜词互动 to be more academically successful in the future.
There is no doubt that encouragement from family members and friends, along with high-quality education from excellent teachers in high school contribute to a student’s success in university study in their own ways. Encouragement from families and friends can make a student mentally healthier, thus being able to handle high-pressures from intensive studies. Nevertheless, there are many other means a student can employ to release pressures, such as exercising and consulting with psychological professionals, which, in some instances, take effect quicker than mere encouragements. As for high-quality education from excellent teachers in high school, it can help a student to develop good studying habits that can benefit the student in a long-term. But to be honest, educations from high-school, however superior, have little relevance to university courses. It is nothing but a piece of step-stone to success on a much higher level.
In conclusion, a university tutor’s individual instructions to help the student to solve problems with schoolwork makes it the most important factor in a student’s success in university study with its reliability, accessibility and effectiveness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, nevertheless, so, thus, as for, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2444.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80522565321 4.8611393121 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40292267889 2.67179642975 127% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527315914489 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 748.8 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9641597492 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.764705882 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7647058824 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.548211926278 0.236089414692 232% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190826492594 0.076458572812 250% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12984965306 0.0737576698707 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.371215292861 0.150856017488 246% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114311971757 0.0645574589148 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 58.1214874552 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 10.9000537634 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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