Which is more important for success: the natural ability you are born with or hard work? Explain your opinion, using specific reasons and examples.
There is no doubt that people are eager to succeed and they try to figure out how they can walk in this route. Success needs some factors to happen: genious, hard-working, and maybe chance are some of the valuable raw materials in this trajectory. While some believe in the individauals' natural abilities to achieve thier goals, others try hard to accompelish their objects. In my view, hard-work is more important than genious to achieve success. I feel this way for a few reasons, which I will elaborate on them in the following essay.
To begin with, as a quote from Edison, one of the most famous inventores in ninteen century, genious is one percent of success, and the rest is hard-working. Actually, natural abilities are only a possibilities which do not lead folks to reach their goal without sturdy attempt. One of the best example of this notion is story behind of the discovery of light bulb by Sir Edison. When he tried more than hundreds time to find a suitable elements to convert the electricity to light and defeated, to answer a reporter who asked him what was the results of those enormous experiments, he replied that " I found that those materials are not good for this purpose". Fourtunately, Edison did not quite his mission and after many demanding effort, he found the right element " Tangesten". Had no the had that perseverance, the world might have seen those glomerous light in night far too longer.
Furhtermorer, hard-work i much imoprtant than natural ability because it can lead to a good ahbit even if there is not any high quality genious in person. People can learn and increase their knowledge through try and error and understand more. Learnig through repetitive attempt can change a huge change in any person ability even in slow-learners folks. My brother experiences show us how it works. Jim, my elder brother, work as a intellectual phisician practitioner with some disadvantaged children. His work is teach people with Intelligence index lower than normal range to improve their natral abilities.
When he said me about his patients' improvment after a couple of months, I surprised how our brain cells respond to practice. I learned from those practices that with hard-working, I can improve my abilities and skills in fields which I thought that I did not have any natural ability.
In sum, considering all aforementioned reasons and details, I firmly believe that hard-working is a critical key in success and more vital than natural ability. This is because genious need learn to improve and because with hard working we can improve our intellectual abilities and talents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, may, so, while, i feel, no doubt, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2203.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99546485261 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85943290868 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560090702948 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9646463261 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.904761905 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47619047619 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240101234267 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708022013922 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626560021617 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141710900009 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463422012332 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.