which is more important:internet or public transportation
These days most demand of human beings is increasing rapidly which must manage by the government of each country. They must divide their budget for these demands properly and rationally concerning to their priority. If two requirement of internet and public transportation is concerned, I, personally, think the budget of internet must be higher than another one. It stands to reason that people will be able to response to most their educational needs more convenient and cheaper in comparison to another ways. And also it cause less pollution of any kind.
In the first place, internet bring a lot opportunities for all people, from children to adults, to be their teacher. They can solve most of their problem by researching on internet; find necessary information relating to their educational or career task; and also be able to learn new skill through available online educational videos. This opportunity, using of internet, make people more knowledgeable with needing less money and time in comparison to something like attending to class, buying educational videos and so on. For example, when I was little, we lived in a small city and did not used to access to internet, we must learn every things either from paper books or attending to class. We weren’t in a good financial condition, so accordingly it was very hard to us being up-to-date and prosperous individuals. We bother from lack of general information. But, when I attend to university, I friend with many student of some big cities which have broad access to internet, with the same intelligent with me. They were more skill person of me, because they was always learning and increasing their knowledges by internet. They were familiar always with new technology and changing around the world which helped them to broaden their perspective. By considering this, I think spending more money to accessible internet for all people outweigh public transportations.
Secondly, it make environment clean. In fact internet make a lot of chance for individuals to work at their home. They will be able hold their career online. And also they can do electronic transaction, online shopping or communication without needing to go out. This causes less people commuting among cities or in them, following result fewer cars driving in each country and also world. As we know, most air pollution and sonic pollution is routed of cars. So if using of cars decrease, such pollution will be decrease to. Accordingly, the sick and mortality rate will be decrease too. In addition, the people who work out of home, will get stuck less, so they wouldn't get stress and pressure from traffic and so forth. In this condition, they can live in the proper mentally condition without any noticeable nervous problems. I am of the opinion that having clean and fresh environment and accordingly health people are vital for every government and society, so it is better to spend more money on internet.
In summary, in my opinion, the importance of internet is noticeably higher than public transportation. Internet prepare opportunity for people to have a good circumstances in order to increase their knowledge, skills and general information online, accordingly being up-to-date and prosperous. They also will be able do some routine online and even choosing some online job to earn money. It is not to mention most of these opportunity make less traffic all around the word and following less pollution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'requirement' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'requirements'.
Suggestion: requirements
...ly concerning to their priority. If two requirement of internet and public transportation i...
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Line 1, column 525, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...comparison to another ways. And also it cause less pollution of any kind. In the fir...
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Line 2, column 495, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omething like attending to class, buying educational videos and so on. For exampl...
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Line 2, column 596, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...e, we lived in a small city and did not used to access to internet, we must learn ev...
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Line 2, column 920, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'many students'.
Suggestion: many students
...n I attend to university, I friend with many student of some big cities which have broad acc...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...h public transportations. Secondly, it make environment clean. In fact internet mak...
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Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... without needing to go out. This causes less people commuting among cities or in the...
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Line 3, column 664, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...t of home, will get stuck less, so they wouldnt get stress and pressure from traffic an...
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Line 4, column 418, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this opportunity' or 'these opportunities'?
Suggestion: this opportunity; these opportunities
...arn money. It is not to mention most of these opportunity make less traffic all around the word a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in addition, in fact, in summary, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 89.0 52.1666666667 171% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2896.0 1977.66487455 146% => OK
No of words: 567.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10758377425 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87972968509 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8656100721 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507936507937 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 898.2 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5105006065 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5333333333 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181048999042 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473074948568 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632143045601 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118476871095 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563767038387 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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