Which one of the following do you think contributes the most to an enjoyable vacation?
Good friends/Good location/Good food
Going on an enjoyable vacation is always a pleasant thing, but people do have different views when talking about what makes a vacation enjoyable. Some people claim that tasty foods and good locations are the most influential factors; however, I tend to attribute the enjoyment of my vacations to good friends.
Good food is indeed attractive, but it is usually not a necessary part of an enjoyable vacation. Delicious foods are not available everywhere, and we do not always expect to enjoy fine dining while raveling. Tasty foods can only make a good vacation more enjoyable, but they cannot guarantee enjoyment. If we do have choices, some of us may even prefer having plain food with friends to eating something tasty alone, for friends can amuse us all along the way, but tasty food only provides satisfaction while we eat. No one keeps eating all along the way, so it is obvious that good food is not as important and influential as good friends.
Good location, in most cases, is more important than good food, but it is still not the primary reason for the joy of a journey. Raveling to a beautiful place and enjoying wonderful scenes can be quite enjoyable, but it only happens when we are in good moods. Being with friends is usually one of the best ways to bring good moods; however, if we travel alone, it sometimes means that we are upset and trying to hide from something unpleasant or unfortunate, then we would be unlikely to have the mood to appreciate the beauty we see. For most of us, going on a vacation alone to anywhere is not as good as raveling with best friends.
Friends are like miracles in our lives, for they make ordinary places beautiful and memorable, and they also make plain food attractive. If we have to make a choice from raveling with our parents to some cool places and staying at home with our friend while parents are gone for a trip, I believe that many of us would prefer the latter one. Students living in dormitories often eat together, and eating with friends brings them a lot of fun which makes some plain food tasty, but if we ask them to have the same thing at home, they would probably not touch the food without the fun. It is such a good thing to have our friends with us no matter where we are or what we do.
Obviously, among the three factors, good friends contribute the most to an enjoyable vacation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, then, while, talking about, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56941176471 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43577716153 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463529411765 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5778943803 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.375 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5625 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385275685745 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167237540206 0.076458572812 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994305245222 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27478411331 0.150856017488 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844836298883 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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