Which one of the following values is the most important to share with a young child (ages 5 to 10)? Why?
1)Being helpful to others
2)Being honest
3)Being well-organized
Use specific examples and evidences to support your answer. "
Parents attach increasing importance to children’s development of personal qualities these days. Accordingly, a controversial topic has aroused about which value is of the greatest significance for the children education. Some argues that being pleased to help others is the most important, while some states that being well-organized means a lot. As for me, honesty is of the top priority to share with young child. My reasons and examples are given below.
Firstly, honesty can help children keep self-discipline and get rid of detrimental consequences. By being taught to be honest, children will understand that they should not cheat or tell a lie, otherwise, they must pay the price for their faults. For example, in primary school, if pupils are caught cheating in exams or copying their classmates’ homework, they must suffer from punishment like writing the self-criticism and getting a zero. But if they are not educated to have good faith during the age of ideological formation, it may cause baneful results when they grow up. Recently, many people cook up stories and spread them out on the internet, taking it for granted that their crime will not be exposed and punished. Actually, they are convicted of fraud and some have already been sentenced to jail.
Secondly, honesty constituted a stepping stone for children to improve their interpersonal relationship in the future. As we all know, no one is willing to make friends with dishonest people. As a result, the friends of a child who often lie to people around him will not trust him anymore and gradually keep away from him. If things continue like that, the child will finally form a solitary personality and have obstacles to communicate with others. It not only keeps the child from socializing well in school and workplace in the future but also does harm to his mental health.
What’s more, compared with the ability to help others and organize well, honesty is the most practical value to be equipped with for children aging 5 to 10. In fact, young children themselves still need help from their teachers and parents to deal with several problems, so they are not mature enough to help others in many circumstances. Besides, 5 to 10 year-old kids do not have so much stuff which requires them to organize. Correspondingly, even though adults teach the children to be helpful and well-organized, they are too childish to really use the ability and achieve the expected effect. On the contrary, honesty can make a big difference since children begin to realize the basic rules of the world in childhood.
In a nutshell, the education of honesty plays the most significant role for children during their young age.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, as for, for example, in fact, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2267.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06026785714 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87799917738 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580357142857 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4959226433 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.045454545 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.40909090909 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230751231957 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655383569183 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659520666353 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134462026236 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730266367043 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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