You may choose between two professors who will be teaching a course that you must take at your university. If the following statements are the only information available to you about the differences between the two professors, which professor would you choose? Why?
-- A professor who proves to be very popular in students’ evaluations
-- A professor who was recently given an award for outstanding research.
Second, if I choose a professor who is popular among us students, I can set up a closer relationship with him compared to the academic one. We must admit that a professor who can gain so many recognition of his students must be available most time of the day so as to spare enough time to communicate with his students in class or out of the class. Take my nice accounting professor for example, he is always willing to provide his hands whenever I have difficulties in reading papers in economy field. In addition, when I get confused about whether I should choose to pursue my postgraduate diploma or to experience ups and downs in real business world, he can always act like a friend and good listener to encourage me to follow my heart. However, when it comes to a professor who was immersed in his research and paper, we may not get enough instructions from him, which has an adverse effect on our attitude towards our future development. That is to say, he may not have enough time to focus on his students. Thus, in terms that the time of a professor is limited, I would like to choose one professor who really cares about and get along well with his students.
To sum up, the professor with a good academic background may not be a nice teacher in students’ evaluations. But a nice professor must have one or more unique thing which can appeal to so many students and gain our respect and love. Therefore, I would choose the professor who proves to be very popular in students’ evaluations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 188, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun recognition seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much recognition', 'a good deal of recognition'.
Suggestion: much recognition; a good deal of recognition
... admit that a professor who can gain so many recognition of his students must be available most ...
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Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... must be available most time of the day so as to spare enough time to communicate with h...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, really, second, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, in addition, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 272.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5625 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78622870447 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.9340565146 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.1 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 5.45110844103 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172157212728 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795006565714 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035653790772 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14496352447 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00289946042594 0.0645574589148 4% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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