Which one is the most important factor to help you work productively?
- Having an environment which is free of noise and distractions
- Knowing that you will receive a reward
- Doing something you are interested in
It is debatable to select a single cause to support a prerequisite that form productive work. If I have to choose the requirement for the productive work from these option, getting reward, perfect work enviroment and interesting work, I will go for the having a good work place. I will develop my reasons to support my points in the subsequent paragraph.
First, a serine environment makes people calm and steady to perform their task well. While Working, environment which is free of stringent activites, provide a salubrious background for the task force so that they comfortably apply as much as concentration for the sound performance. For instance, when I was working as employed in the editor in the Prize international journal, I had to do myriad of paper edit as much as possible. At that time, I needed a peaceful place for my greater efficiency as I could not tolerate a single minor disturbance while doing work. Luckily, I was assigned a cabin where usually present a pin drop silence and having my office located far from the crowded place, it also helped a lot to create healthy sound free environment. Had I worked in the chaotic place, my work rate would certainly go downward.
Second, on prolong exposure of employee to the noisy place can hamper them mentally which directly affect thier task efficiency. Globally, many people suffering from anxiety and panic attack in long run when they keep doing their work at such disturbed surrounding. Once the worker have turbulence in their mind, there are unable to put same kind of the effort in thier work; consequently, losing the performance of the firm as a whole.
To wrap up, I think having a good place in the job is necessary to enhance the work performance of the fellow worker as it creates healthy attitude in them and increase their work engagement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, second, so, well, while, for instance, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85942492013 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79546690944 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584664536741 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.213039925 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168503389164 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585017780511 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367375980247 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102338959111 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403526672144 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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