In today's world the usage of access information from anywhere and anytime is possible with the help of internet.It gives us the information from all over the world with in a seconds without need of other person.By using internet the people are experiencing a new level which never they had before.It has both good and bad ways of accessing the availability of information.In my view,using internet gives us information alot of the particular subjects easily and fastly and more over we can share the ideas globally .
In begin with,the people who want to do research on the particular subject,they will get lot of information.The research work will complete in less time and with the quality of the content.For example,when i was a student in university,I took robotics class.With the help of internet I used to gain the knowledge from various parts of the robots and how to assemble them to work in a proper way.Internet saves my time and gives more quality of content for my researh work .
In addition,by using the internet people can share their ideas globally.For example,in a facebook group some will join across the world and discuss about the some topic.When they are discussing about that topic they will share their ideas and views how they analyzed that topic.Now-a-days the people are more using the whatsapp,in these they share the pics,videos and documents by just siiting at their places.
As I have illustrated,we must know how to use availability information whether in a positive way or negative way.I beleive that using internet gives more information easily and fastly,furthermore we can share our ideas globally.If we want to learn new about anything without seeking any help internet is the best I suggest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, so, for example, in addition, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 285.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0701754386 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07056626386 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.1344086022 353% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6171467355 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 361.25 100.406767564 360% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.25 20.6045352989 346% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.25 5.45110844103 298% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237438240285 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147992702756 0.076458572812 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091924818499 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147992702756 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091924818499 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.1 11.7677419355 324% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.59 58.1214874552 -1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 10.1575268817 305% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.31 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.87 8.01818996416 136% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.0537634409 302% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.247311828 303% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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