The article claims that the how the tidal energy is produced by using the dams on estuary of the river.Conversely,the professor opposes the statements in the reading and highlights the some dis-advantages which are caused by this tidal energy and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First,the author asserts that the four periods of energy production are possible every day in order to produce practical amounts of electricity.However,the professor contends this point by saying that the tidal power can never do more than provide a fraction of our total energy needs because those are not the good locations to produce high amount of electricity.
Second,the reading states that the tidal power is renewable ,non-polluting and contributes no greenhouse gases to the atmosphere.In contrast,the lecturer opposes this point by explaining the negative impacts of the tidal generators on the eco-system of the related regions.First of all,thequality of the water in the estuary area will be changed and this will effect on the local wildlife and furthermore the salinity level will increases,when the sea water is mixed with estuary water causes the growth of the red tide organisms which leads to cause paralysis in shellfish and affects many aquatic creatures.
Finally,the article says that this kind of system can provide a useful energy supplement to other sources in an era of diminishing fossil fuel reserves.On the other hand,the professsor refutes the point by saying about the fish that naturally migrate between the river and sea won't be able to pass the barrage.Furthermore,fishing boats are normally moored in the estuary and they can't navigate between estuary and open sea .According,to the professor all these reasons affects the economy of that area .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, in contrast, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1373.03311258 110% => OK
No of words: 279.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40501792115 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40854268938 2.5805825403 132% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 21.2450331126 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.797731916 49.2860985944 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 377.0 110.228320801 342% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.75 21.698381199 321% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.0 7.06452816374 439% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 4.19205298013 692% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100995722699 0.272083759551 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659902356003 0.0996497079465 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384049009959 0.0662205650399 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659902356003 0.162205337803 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384049009959 0.0443174109184 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.9 13.3589403974 291% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.02 53.8541721854 -13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 5.55761589404 286% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.0289183223 285% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.28 12.2367328918 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.81 8.42419426049 140% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 63.6247240618 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 10.7273730684 256% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.498013245 282% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 11.2008830022 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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