Admittedly, workers play a pivotal role in the processing of to developing countries. the more skilled full labor the better development countries. Some people believe that having many different skills would help producer to become happier rather than doing one job. however, others disagree. As far as I am concern, engaging with multiple task would have some beneficial for employee. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First and for most, it is good to say that, if you gain different skills Through your life time especially in your youngsters age, you will be more useful in your career process. In other words, the more once being skillful craft the more being beneficial in his professional environment. One of my own example is a good case in point. When I was studied in universities I had decide to engage myself in different part-time job which one of my professors had suggested me. I was recommended to the big company which was an important stage of my life, because, I had gain the opportunities to surrounded myself with different activities as a volunteer. What was quiet important for me was that to fain various skills over the course of my part-tie job. During that time, I feel sense of satisfaction because I have gain different skills which was drastically useful for my futures job.
Second, people with kinds of abilities have great chance to become wealthier. In fact, one who have more skills would have great chance to join in a big groups of business which is absolutely make more money for them. One recent study represents the result of number of skillful employee in groups of company. What was really obvious was that, companies are now needed the professional and crafty and hand experience people which could be more effective for them. These circumstances shows that, if people gain more task and duty during their career time, they would have bigger chance to employee in such big company with greater income.
In conclusion, I firmly agree that grasping various knowledge and skills through your job is not only make you handy and useful one but also give you a chance to become enhance your wage and income, which is kind of satisfying.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
... processing of to developing countries. the more skilled full labor the better deve...
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Suggestion: many
...ntries. Some people believe that having many different skills would help producer to become ha...
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...come happier rather than doing one job. however, others disagree. As far as I am concer...
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Suggestion: lifetime
... you gain different skills Through your life time especially in your youngsters age, you ...
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Line 2, column 336, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...my own example is a good case in point. When I was studied in universities I had dec...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'decided'.
Suggestion: decided
...hen I was studied in universities I had decide to engage myself in different part-time...
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Suggestion: decided
...hen I was studied in universities I had decide to engage myself in different part-time...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'gained'.
Suggestion: gained
...ortant stage of my life, because, I had gain the opportunities to surrounded myself ...
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... groups of business which is absolutely make more money for them. One recent study r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61266227345 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521052631579 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1338374957 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164208072415 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491648418432 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040456135663 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955054339793 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320227656592 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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