People today spend enormous amount of time in their workplace which shows the importance of the satisfaction of their job. In this regard, some people prefer to do different tasks while working. However, others prefer to concentrate on a single task during the day. When it comes to me I am of the opinion that people should have many different tasks to do. I feel in this way for two main reasons which I will explore in following essay.
to begin with, working in different tasks is more interesting than working a single task during the workday. On the other hand, doing a single task during all day is boring and people may be bored in long run. One of the most essential factors which is necessary for maintaining the high level of ability is passion. In fact, if people be passionate about their work, they will definitely enhance their skill and; consequently, great results will be obtained. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Ten years ago, when I graduated from university, I decided to work in a private company. At first, I enjoyed working there. However, six months later I realized that I do not enjoy that job because it was boring. I was supposed to work in a single task during the workday. Several weeks later, I resigned that job. If I had not resigned that job, I would have faced really difficult time there.
The other equally significant reason worth mentioning is that, working in different tasks help workers to be adept in different skills. While people working on different tasks, they gain experiences in different fields and they can use them in their real life. For instance, people who know how to repair electrical instruments, should be adept in lots of different fields. moreover, having knowledge about different skills, helps workers to approach their practical problems in a plethora of ways. In addition, it helps them to be more creative than others who works just on a single task.
to sum up by taking into account all of the above-mentioned reasons and examples, I strongly approve of working in different types of tasks. This is because working in such jobs is much more enjoyable, and because it helps workers to use their skills in order to solve their problems in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, in fact, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78865979381 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60314381904 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525773195876 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8287596882 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7826086957 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8695652174 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73913043478 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301273518227 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086519670389 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766917923371 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179984635256 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048905200127 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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