No one can deny the fact that types of tasks that employee do in daily basis have a significant impact on their satisfaction by job. As far as I`m concerned, performing variety of tasks during daily shift is more enjoyable than doing similar tasks all day long. I feel this way for a couple of reasons that I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
It is without a shadow of doubt that changing the nature of tasks a worker does during a daily shifts will give him or her positive energy compared to doing the same thing again and again. My personal experience is compelling evidence on what I mean. Back in 2019 when I was working for CVS pharmacy, I had to spend the whole shift just at the pick- up station which made me feel very boarded and unsatisfied. If I was alternating between the cashier disk and the fill station, I would probably have felt more satisfied and I would not quit my job at that pharmacy and switched to Walgreens.
It`s also goes without saying that performing different chores can provide workers with an outstanding experience that can make them more passionate with their job. Going back to my experience in working at pharmacies, Currently, I`m way better at doing pharmacy technician work at Walgreens pharmacy than I was at CVS. This dramatic change in my attitude toward my job is just because I got the chance to do more diverse tasks in my new job. Even though I still have to spend some time in the morning at the front desk and deal with customers` different issues, I also switch with the evening technician after my lunch break and take over the fill as well as answer the phone and work on variety of chores till I take over. So without his alternation in duties throughout the day I would not feel this motivation and energy in my work.
It can be summed up by accentuating that it`s really important for employee`s satisfaction to do different duties in the same shift.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...diverse tasks in my new job. Even though I still have to spend some time in the m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, still, well, i feel, i mean, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65895953757 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69962618826 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540462427746 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8270595893 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207892676637 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763163652217 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797206825533 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139127835182 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885346344191 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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