Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Sine the development of the societies, sophisticated jobs, which need different expertises, have been emerged and changed the human being's lives. As far as the finding an appropriate and convenient career is concerned, some are of the opinion that multi-task jobs are better option than jobs with only one task to do, while others believe otherwise. I-for one- subscribe to the first opinion on the ground that a job with different tasks is more enjoyable, and will help to broaden the employee's knowledge.
To begin with, doing a similar task would be monotonous in long run. Just as the curves go up and down in a cardiograph, showing a person is still alive, the struggles of every day work are the indicators of one's being living. People tend to have some innovations in their work, so repeating a chore every day has an extreme impact on the individual's incentive. Employees will be mentally exhausted and try to scape from their work as much as they can. On the other hand, a multi-task job constantly has challenges which makes people more active and feel alive. For example, I work in an engineering company that is project-base and every project has its unique features and demands that when I find a solution to various problems, it brings me immense emotional satisfaction and maximum enjoyment so much so that I prefer my job to a tedious job with even more revenue.
Secondly, multi-task careers acquire extensive knowledge that can pave the way for the workers to learn more and be more expert in different areas.As a result, they would think that they are important in their association and this will increase their efficiency. Again, consider my job for instance, thank to the different tasks that I required to do, I now have broad knowledge in various facets of engineering. For example, I know the mecjanical engineering as my major, and besides, I have gained some expertise in electrical and material engineering that makes me a so much better engineer than I used to be.
All in all, I do believe that doing different tasks during a day is a better option for the workers because it is not tedious and make people more expert in their work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: employees'; employee's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79144385027 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74062997258 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524064171123 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5559670428 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.846153846 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7692307692 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 5.45110844103 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263438007459 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989279166931 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728838954483 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186411802117 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592230340325 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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