the world is changed quickly, people in the past were happier and satisfied than they are today
Since the beginning of the current century, the world has become very intricate and technologically advanced. Some people believe that quickly changed life puts people under severe stress. However, there is another substantial body of evidence that cats doubt on this belief. From a personal perspective, even though the world nowadays moves faster than it was in the past, people are more satisfied then they were a long time ago. Given the technological innovations, there are many improvements in the healthcare system, communication and education. Below I will strive to explain my supporting points in more details.
The first and foremost point, in the past, the healthcare system was primitive. Not only because of the limited number of hospitals, but also the facilities were inadequate. Furthermore, people in the past could lose their lives because a lot of vaccines and cures did not exist. Nevertheless, nowadays technology has made an impressive advancement that would seem impossible for people in the past. A vivid example that could be given to shed light on what was elaborated above is, fifty years ago, my dad lost his life because of cirrhosis of his liver, on the other hand, people today who suffer from the same disease could make liver transplantation and live longer. As a result, given the medical technological advances, people are happier than they were in the past.
Next, coupled with healthcare enhancement, communication improvement is another reason why people nowadays are more satisfied than in the past. To illustrate this point, in the past, there was no internet, so people could not communicate with each other easily. However, the internet has made the world a global village. To put it in other words, provided that when people use the internet, they could communicate with anyone at any part of that world with no problem at all. For instance, five years ago, I immigrated from my country to California, even though I left my family and friend, I do not feel homesickness. Given that I used the internet to download WhatsApp on my cellphone, I could use it to make a video-call and see them every day. In addition to that, I have social media accounts on Facebook and Instagram, so I could connect my friends through means of likes and comments. On the other hand, these facilities would seem fiction for people in the past. Consequently, given the technological advancements, people today are more satisfied than they were in the past.
Taking everything into consideration, without a doubt, Although technology has made the world changes very fast, it has many virtues that make life better and more comfortable. It is suggested that advocates for education in order to progress and develop.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, for instance, in addition, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2291.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07982261641 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86943661738 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518847006652 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 729.9 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5847041171 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6086956522 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6086956522 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73913043478 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343986033321 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991634614848 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119250037801 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19627878377 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772960576692 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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