The world is changing quickly. People are less happy than before.
Happiness is always the most concerning issue in the human society. Some people ague that the changing world may lead to less happy of people than before. But, from my perspective, rapid development of the world makes our life easier to feel happy than before.
Today, current persons are easier to enjoy their trip. Celerity promotion of science and technology are bringing people a handy life. For example, when you are traveling to a foreign country where you cannot speak this country’s language, you can use a translation application in your cell phone. Then you can communicate with local residents without barrier and go wherever you want to go. However, in the past, people would be afraid to go abroad. By reason that they cannot speak another language. So, it’s a great thing that the world changing quickly. It makes our trip more leisure and accessible.
In addition, the booming world of technology is more possible to share happiness. As the approach of 5G are, we can send a message to everywhere by only two or three second. And the message might be a photo or a short video. For instance, everyone may have some friends in different city. They couldn’t see each other or stay together frequently. And when they want to share a funny picture or video to each others at once, they can emit a message timely. Whereas at my father’s age, if they wanted to keep in touch with their friends who lived in another city, writing a letter might be the only way. But, it always took about one or two month. Thus, now we are more connected with our friends and share happiness more easier.
All in all, there is no doubt that people are happier than before when the world is changing quickly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the human society. Some people ague that the changing world may lead to less happ...
^^
Line 5, column 650, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...y. But, it always took about one or two month. Thus, now we are more connected with o...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 726, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ed with our friends and share happiness more easier. All in all, there is no doubt that...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, so, then, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75666666667 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51986551669 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8630146201 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9523809524 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300811293552 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835678162653 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152739724309 0.0737576698707 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241545992969 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.194911589844 0.0645574589148 302% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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