The yougester are essential part in any society, whether the youth have influence the decision that determine the future or not, this can be weighted in many aspects. In my perspective, I do not concur with the statement that young people do not have impact on the future, in the following essay I will elaborate on a couple reason to explain my point of view in this subject.
First, and foremost, the youth is a large part in this world, they have a lot of information and a huge amount of knowledge which can give a crucial benefits to their society. For instance, my son has information in many fields especially in the technology, he is an engineer, he does a very beautiful designs, in addition he helps me in a lot of things because I am not expert with computer, therefore I always ask for his advice. as you can see the importance of youth in the future decision
Second, the young people are familiar with the social media, they communicate with each other easily, they used to use internet, also have snapchat and Instagram by them they can exchange the information and talk about recent evolution in all part of the life and help to spread this important knowledge in all era. In addition the young people have a lot of energy they can do a hard work and help in development of the society. Therefor I believe that youngster have a positive effect on the future of world.
To sum up, the statement that youth do not have important effect on society is not as persuasive as it stands, this is based on the exposition that I mentioned above, especially the young people have a huge energy that enable them to build influential future, moreover, these youth more familiar with social media which help to facilitate the spread of information about any new invention around the world.
The yougester are essential part in any society, whether the youth have influence the decision that determine the future or not, this can be weighted in many aspects. In my perspective, I do not concur with the statement that young people do not have impact on the future, in the following essay I will elaborate on a couple reason to explain my point of view in this subject.
First, and foremost, the youth is a large part in this world, they have a lot of information and a huge amount of knowledge which can give a crucial benefits to their society. For instance, my son has information in many fields especially in the technology, he is an engineer, he does a very beautiful designs, in addition he helps me in a lot of things because I am not expert with computer, therefore I always ask for his advice. as you can see the importance of youth in the future decision
Second, the young people are familiar with the social media, they communicate with each other easily, they used to use internet, also have snapchat and Instagram by them they can exchange the information and talk about recent evolution in all part of the life and help to spread this important knowledge in all era. In addition the young people have a lot of energy they can do a hard work and help in development of the society. Therefor I believe that youngster have a positive effect on the future of world.
To sum up, the statement that youth do not have important effect on society is not as persuasive as it stands, this is based on the exposition that I mentioned above, especially the young people have a huge energy that enable them to build influential future, moreover, these youth more familiar with social media which help to facilitate the spread of information about any new invention around the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.615625 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6180693477 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490625 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.1344086022 199% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.705620341 48.9658058833 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.625 100.406767564 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.6045352989 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 5.45110844103 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.481349927257 0.236089414692 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218890802512 0.076458572812 286% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144425578694 0.0737576698707 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314517563967 0.150856017488 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.201118344273 0.0645574589148 312% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 11.7677419355 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.1575268817 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.0537634409 179% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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