Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Do you agree or disagree?
I agree with the statement that young people enjoy their lives as compared to the older people.
Young people naturally have more vigour than old people, so, they definitely can spend their energies on enjoyable activities. Whereas old people confine their activities based on their energies and hence, younger people have more opportunities to indulge in fun activities than old ones. For example, as compared to an 80 year old person, a 20 year old person will be more active and probably have less health problems, this allows the latter to think about the ways to enjoy life, whereas the former has to think about ways to maintain his or her health, so the former has a more enjoyable life as he or she has more opportunities to do so.
Older people are more experienced in life than the younger ones and so, they often stick to reality. The younger people lead a very quixotic life and therefore are more optimistic and carefree. Their limited understanding of the world prevents them from overthinking situations, whereas the older generation people, due to their greater exposure to the world, tend to ponder all the consequences of a decision and therefore are more prone to overthinking. Hence, as the famous saying goes, Ignorance is bliss, younger people who are more ignorant towards life than older people, will be more happy. For example, a young person when he or she has to make a serious decision like marriage, then he or she will think about limited prospects like life after 10 years or financial status but an old person who has a more wider perspective towards life will think about advanced aspects like life after some 30 years or sustainability or will be less prone to taking risks. This makes the former more practical and therefore preventing him or her from taking any risks that can lead to an enjoyable life.
We are well aware of the fact that a hopeless life is meaningless. People with no hope or ambition do not live their lives to the fullest as they do not have any reason to feel optimistic. Young people, who have an entire life ahead will have a myriad number of opportunities in front of them and hence, they can have many ambitions, while, older people, since they have already experienced almost everything in their lives, will not have as many opportunities as the former group of people and hence, are not ambitious. Therefore, young people will be more optimistic and happy as they have so many opportunities in front of them.
Most adventurous activities that are deemed as popular fun activities have age limit. Since, a certain amount of risk is associated with such activities, most of them have an age limit.
Hence, the above points elucidate the fact that young people lead a more enjoyable life than older people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 812, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'wider' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: wider
...cial status but an old person who has a more wider perspective towards life will think abo...
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Line 6, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... more enjoyable life than older people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2297.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80543933054 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58735869036 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42050209205 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 740.7 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.9730815573 48.9658058833 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.117647059 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1176470588 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356365884488 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148084125618 0.076458572812 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099023959828 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223183357111 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112024020995 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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