Young people enjoy life more than older people do is a common belief, I personally don’t agree with this statement. Enjoyment of one’s life is not a quantitative measure, but a personal experience, hence would be unfair to say a person X enjoys more than person Y. This belief has stood ground based on two factors which broadly sperate old people from young people, and that is : eating habits and physical strength.
Many people believe that because younger people can eat whatever they wish, they get to enjoy more, while older people because of health reasons have to be lot more considerate on what they consume. Younger people can explore more and more dishes and consume alchol more liberally, while older people have to stick to a routine.
Another important aspect is the physical activity the body can endure, younger people can take more physical stress. They can participate in dancing, trecking and any sort of adventure sports, while older people are advised not to take such risks. This is another such belief which makes people think that younger people get to enjoy life more.
However, what defines enjoyment in life ? climbing mountains, eating exotic dishes or partying all night may define enjoyment for some. While, seeing their children become successful in life or playing with their grandkids may count as enjoyment for some. Enjoyment is not an external driver as many believe, but an internal driver. A younger person may not be enjoying one’s life while an older person may be having the best time of his life everyday, it all comes down to how one sees his or her own life. Everyone can enjoy life irrespective of how old or how poor they are.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 43, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Climbing
...wever, what defines enjoyment in life ? climbing mountains, eating exotic dishes or part...
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Line 10, column 449, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...may be having the best time of his life everyday, it all comes down to how one sees his ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, while, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 286.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38235692493 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552447552448 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3635573609 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.214285714 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417380545047 0.236089414692 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155490948912 0.076458572812 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135210773991 0.0737576698707 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2604099278 0.150856017488 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951554671389 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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