Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that young people have a remarkable role in the process of decision making for their countries. After twenty century, the most important political and social changes were planned, regulated and conducted by the young member of societies. Contrary to this popular belief, there are still those who argue that governments try to keep away young people from participating in political and social activities, by making them busy with some interesting entertainments. However, I, to a great extent, disagree with this idea that young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
First and foremost, today all people after the age of 18 have this allow to involve in voting. For instance, all parliament's representatives and the president are being selected directly based on citizens votes. In addition, the number of people, especially young people participation is an important factor to demonstrate political liberality in countries. Therefore, all governments try to raise young members enter in these programs.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that today most political and social councils at universities are so popular. Every substantial decision of governments will be monitored and evaluated by university students. For example, last year, the Iran government decided to build a new dam on one of the reveres. Nonetheless, this dam could dry out a beautiful lack that river flow was ended to it. For this concern, we invented the president to our university to address our concern.
Finally, yet importantly, today more young people obtain this opportunity to enter to political parties. In the past, older people had not enough confidence to young people to accept them in political parties. However, during these years a lot of young gifted experts had appeared in the political world. It can show that our modern society is moving toward which its managers choose based on their eligibility apart from age.
On the basis of reasons that were mentioned above, I am convinced that young people have a significant influence on determining the future of society as a whole. Because the possibility of involving in voting, and forming a lot of political and social communities at universities, and increase the number of young country managers and political parties members.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...aking for their countries. After twenty century, the most important political and socia...
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Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'involving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: involving
...ple after the age of 18 have this allow to involve in voting. For instance, all parliament...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2039.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32375979112 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94046482707 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548302872063 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7124009882 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.315789474 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1578947368 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386449275894 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116320260821 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163059227098 0.0737576698707 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213448797704 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137902753156 0.0645574589148 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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