young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
In today's progressive and sophisticated world where we live, those who are the leader our country can build our future life. Leaders can revise our future and have a significant effect on individuals, especially young people. In this line of thought, some people believe that nowadays, youths are not allowing to make a decision and determine society. I, personally, agree with them for two main reasons, on which I will elaborate in the following paragraphs.
First of all, in this modern era, people choose their representative from older adults and put them as a leader, so youths they are not allowed to select from crowed and make a fi decision for future life. To be more specific, folks considerably trust experienced ones and do not pay sufficient attention to youths. Young people are not in a position which can solve abstruse problems and make a better path for future life. I can allude to a personal experience when my grandfather lived his friend at the age of thirty was chose to be the leader of our city, but today the youngest leader in our town is forty years old. Had he never lived on those days, he would never have done experience life as a leader.
Secondly, there is no right for young people to pole and express their notion about society today. To further illustrate, in the past, when people reach eighteen years old can choose a leader, now lawmaker makes a sever rule that people when reaching the age of twenty-five can pole. Leaders ponder, youths under age 25 cannot recognize the qualified leader, and they are on the effect of their emotions. Therefore, young people less than previous could impact on their future.
To sum up, I assume that by passing time, youth have less opportunity to make a vital decision which changes their future society. Not only today, leaders choose among older people, not a young one, but also the age to select leaders are upcoming. As for writers' advice, I urge leaders to involve youth decisions on their essential fundamental duties.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'making'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: making
... that nowadays, youths are not allowing to make a decision and determine society. I, pe...
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Line 3, column 526, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...ved his friend at the age of thirty was chose to be the leader of our city, but today...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'cannot' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'cans'.
Suggestion: cans
...le. Leaders ponder, youths under age 25 cannot recognize the qualified leader, and the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as for, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81791907514 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53458321332 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563583815029 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2012579592 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.1875 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222329877336 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804031493037 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652506635629 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147337895475 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220222577191 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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