elephant
The reading and lecture are both about the elephant and how much this kind of animals are captivated by human because of their special creature, and they have three particular abilities. The passage presents three explanations to posit why humans involve with misunderstanding, however, professor accept that elephants are a fascinating animals.
To begin with, the author of the reading claims that elephants be aware about the time of their death, due to the fact that when they are old and weak went to near lake until die and scientist named the location Grave-yard. In addition, scientist found fossils of bone remain. Nevertheless, the professor opposes this claim by mentioning that elephant do not know about the accurate time of their life, they merely go adjacent to lake because of their teeth and jaws and finally die there. When elephant get older, they do not feed on previous vegetation, so they go near lake. We all know that the vegetation near water are softer than others.
Secondly, the article posits that elephants have a specific artistic talent, and they can maintain brush by their truck to paint flower and so on. However, the professor maintain an opposite opinion that it is not about their talent because trainer teach elephants to paint certain pattern. Moreover, elephants have sensitive ear, and human by utilizing their ear train them what to draw. For example, by repeating some sound when elephants draw in a right way, they teach them how to paint a picture.
Third, the reading mention that elephants are afraid of mice. they do not feel fear when meet lions or other wild animals, but they afraid mice. The professor, on the other hand cast doubt on this claim by stating that the reaction of elephants leads to misunderstanding of scientist. Elephants are not afraid of mice because of the mice, they are afraid because mice are unfamiliar to them. For instance, in the zoo, elephants do not feel fear, since they realize mice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 338, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'animal'?
Suggestion: animal
...accept that elephants are a fascinating animals. To begin with, the author of the...
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Line 9, column 447, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...epeating some sound when elephants draw in a right way, they teach them how to paint a picture...
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Line 13, column 63, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...tion that elephants are afraid of mice. they do not feel fear when meet lions or oth...
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Line 13, column 133, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[8]
Message: The adjective afraid is used with 'of': 'afraid of mice'.
Suggestion: afraid of mice
...t lions or other wild animals, but they afraid mice. The professor, on the other hand cast ...
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Line 13, column 472, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...not feel fear, since they realize mice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 30.3222958057 158% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 332.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97891566265 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.556375537 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527108433735 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 419.366225166 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5370012709 49.2860985944 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.3125 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0625 7.06452816374 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356399164554 0.272083759551 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14931903669 0.0996497079465 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807994432341 0.0662205650399 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23924305235 0.162205337803 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396652939599 0.0443174109184 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.3589403974 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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