Your government has announced that it wishes to build a social house near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community.
As mostly known, every government should allocate a part from its budget to the construction of new nonprofit building. This is the case of our government, it implemented a new scheme of building a social house near to the community. Apparently, this project will provide from one part some prominent benefits, from the other engendres unwanted repercussions. They are compartmentalized as follow.
To begin with, we are likely to capitalize widely on this new social house. First of all, it goes without saying our community is rife of homeless individuals. The thing that puts more challenges to overcome down the road. Thus, providing that chip among the society with an adequate housing will reduce their numbers on the streets and offer extra workforce in the labour market, thereupon boosting the economic growth.
Second of all, that kind of buildings have notable peculiarities over the other genre of houses, in asmuch it is economic and less costly, we can save a fraction from our income thereby switching the current residential area to this social habitat. For example, my father's earning is limited, it merely suffices to housing expenses, therefore my dad had to work extra hours after midnight in order to get sufficient money for other charges. So, If we opt to the social house we will be able to save a lot.
On the contrary, the social houses may influence negatively our community.
Some would not tolerate the social atmosphere inside these houses. In other words, it is commonly believed that living side to side your neighbor tend to create quarrels and disputes. My friend experience clarifies the point, he used to dwell in a social house, and his neighbors were troublesome and disturbing. He could not bear the annoyance, then he asked them politely to handle the source of disturbance, nevertheless they persisted to annoy him and as soon as they started a fight in the building ending up by being caught. The example demonstrates that it better to rent an expensive house rather than seeking for cheap dwelling with bad conditions.
All in all, the social houses are a double-edged sword, but personally I am inclined to say that if you have to look for the quality not the price in order to not be deceived by things that you didn't predict.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, kind of, first of all, in other words, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94010416667 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76954930892 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606770833333 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4983674915 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.388888889 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208622960369 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606300202 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768578488495 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106737262493 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652547568979 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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