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In my view, I think that people should do sports exercise daily because it keeps them fit and healthy, the research showed that sport tends to decrease the heart disease rate by strengthening the muscles in the body as well as it sustains the perfect rate of diabetes and pressure for. In addition, sports help to people to cheer up and to improve their psychological status by rejecting over thinking especially if you have a bad mood for that reason it is proven that sport best medical recipe for the mental patient.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, i think, in addition, as well as, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.4613686534 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 30.3222958057 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 428.0 1373.03311258 31% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 92.0 270.72406181 34% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65217391304 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.09704101468 4.04702891845 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49536432214 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 145.348785872 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.739130434783 0.540411800872 137% => OK
syllable_count: 129.6 419.366225166 31% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 13.0662251656 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 21.2450331126 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.0 49.2860985944 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 214.0 110.228320801 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.0 21.698381199 212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.0 7.06452816374 453% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.3589403974 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.71 53.8541721854 77% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 5.55761589404 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.0289183223 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.58 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.42419426049 117% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 63.6247240618 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 24.0 10.7273730684 224% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.498013245 194% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 11.2008830022 214% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:

para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3

Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).

Don't need a conclusion paragraph.

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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