There are number of concerns raised on the benefits mentioned in the passage. It is claimed that decreasing number of working days from five to four will increase the profits for the employer but it is not plausible. Since the employer needs to find more employees to work on the fifth day, the cost involved in recruiting, training and taking care of health benefits for them is going to be more than what they are currently spending.
On the other hand, employer could make the employees to do overtime to compensate for the fifth day or could demand them to finsh the five days of job in their four days working hours and they can make the employees to get into much worse state than they are already in. Since employees are left with the option to pick between four day or five days of shift, people who are picking four days shift might lose their chances of getting promotions or any benefits from the employer. And also in case of any economic tragedy, they are more vulnerable to lose their jobs then those who picked five days shift.
Consideration of the two work shifts is to provide the employees the time to spend with their families. But in order to suceed in job and attaining skills, they need consistent attention towards their work. Prolonged relaxation could make the employees incompetent in their work. It is true, providing four day work shifts reduce the unemployment rate, but it involves various cost factors that the employer should consider and the number of employees opting for the lesser working days. Based on the outcomes of the above mentioned considerations, we should provide this option.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 282.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78014184397 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44704490584 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507092198582 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5563371108 49.2860985944 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.545454545 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06452816374 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267472322862 0.272083759551 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106146033463 0.0996497079465 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862099183501 0.0662205650399 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190342580057 0.162205337803 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698401884008 0.0443174109184 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.3589403974 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 53.8541721854 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.7273730684 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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