Although it’s a new technology, solar energy provides benefits to the entire world. First, solar energy eliminates our reliance on non-renewable fossil fuels. Additionally, solar energy is non-pollutant, which makes it better for everyone. Finally, there is almost no maintenance as solar panels have a long-life span without regular maintenance. So, the benefits seem to be overwhelmingly positive and supportive of further production.
The first benefit is the ability for solar energy to reduce reliance on fossil fuels. Many sources of energy are renewable only over millions of years. Unfortunately, humans consume those faster than they are produced. Solar energy could be a replacement for non-renewable sources as a perpetual source of energy. Thus, solar energy can become a new energy with no legitimate fear of overproduction.
Another benefit is the non-pollutant aspect of solar energy. Burning fossil fuels is known to produce deadly pollution, while solar energy produces zero harmful byproducts. While current energy sources produce disgusting smells, sounds, and visuals, solar energy produces nothing offensive. Therefore, when considering the health of the planet, the lifelong health benefits of solar energy are unparalleled.
Finally, solar energy has low costs. The cost of solar panels is a one-time purchase. Also, after installation, the lifespan of a solar panel is thirty years. After the initial cost, the solar panel will cost almost nothing. This is a benefit to personal finances, but also peace of mind since there is no worry about rising prices or lack of resources.
In conclusion, these benefits provide support for more people to consider switching to solar power. Both the renewable aspect as well as the non-polluting aspect means that there will be added benefits for individuals, cities, and the planet. The low lifelong cost of installation and maintenance provides a lifetime of benefits. Thus, solar energy looks to be one of the world’s great ideas.
Both passages discuss the benefits of solar power. They present arguments that can encourage people to start using this renewable source of energy.
First of all, the reading passage argues that if people start using solar power, eventually, there will be a decrease in fossil fuels. Likewise, the lecturer claims another interesting fact. One panel can give the same amount of energy as fossil fuels in 5 years.
Moreover, the author illustrates his point by sharing that the burning of fossil fuels is a hazard not only to the environment but to humans, insomuch as it produces bad smells and lousy noises. On the other hand, solar power does cause nonharm to any living being. Besides, the lecturer points out that consumers can give many uses to solar power. For instance, as a heat power and they will have total control of their energy.
According to the passage, in comparison to fossil fuels, solar power cost much less. This is due to the consumer only have to purchase a panel once and pay for the installation. Also, the lecturer talks about another financial benefit. People can gain money by selling solar power, as well as for the installation process. So, solar energy also contributes to the economic system of the country.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, as for, for instance, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 1373.03311258 76% => OK
No of words: 211.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91943127962 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42324272384 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616113744076 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 419.366225166 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7503389452 49.2860985944 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1428571429 110.228320801 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 21.698381199 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06452816374 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213037651494 0.272083759551 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076481962739 0.0996497079465 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546876783014 0.0662205650399 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136142027833 0.162205337803 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406116672803 0.0443174109184 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.3589403974 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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