Although it’s a new technology, solar energy provides benefits to the entire world. First, solar energy eliminates our reliance on non-renewable fossil fuels. Additionally, solar energy is non-pollutant, which makes it better for everyone. Finally, there is almost no maintenance as solar panels have a long life span without regular maintenance. So, the benefits seem to be overwhelmingly positive and supportive of further production.
The first benefit is the ability for solar energy to reduce reliance on fossil fuels. Many sources of energy are renewable only over millions of years. Unfortunately, humans consume those faster than they are produced. Solar energy could be a replacement for non-renewable sources as a perpetual source of energy. Thus solar energy can become a new energy with no legitimate fear of overproduction.
Another benefit is the non-pollutant aspect of solar energy. Burning fossil fuels is known to produce deadly pollution, while solar energy produces zero harmful byproducts. While current energy sources produce disgusting smells, sounds, and visuals, solar energy produces nothing offensive. Therefore, when considering the health of the planet, the lifelong health benefits of solar energy are unparalleled.
Finally, solar energy has low costs. The cost of solar panels is a one-time purchase. Also, after installation, the lifespan of a solar panel is thirty years. After the initial cost, the solar panel will cost almost nothing. This is a benefit to personal finances, but also peace of mind since there is no worry about rising prices or lack of resources.
In conclusion, these benefits provide support for more people to consider switching to solar power. Both the renewable aspect as well as the non-polluting aspect means that there will be added benefits for individuals, cities, and the planet. The low lifelong cost of installation and maintenance provides a lifetime of benefits. Thus, solar energy looks to be one of the world’s great ideas.
The article states that solar energy has become an important form of energy by providing following benefits. Solar energy reduces the reliance on fossil fuels. It is non-pollutant and it has low cost. The professor supports the the points mentioned in the passage by redrafting the lecture stating that solar energy is renewable form of energy. It is multifaceted and it is financially feasible.
First the passage describes the solar energy reduces the load on fossil fuels for energy production. Humans over the years consumed renewable sources of energy that highlighted the fear of reproduction. Although solar energy being a non-renewable source of energy can reduce the reliance of mankind on fossil fuels. the professor supports the theory of the passage by stating that solar energy is offset production and is the renewable clean energy. He also mentions that energy used is worth energy gained.
Second, the article posits that solar energy is non-pollutant. Fossil fuels are known to produce deadly production. The professor supports this point by stating that solar energy can be used in various sectors without the fear of pollution. He mentions energy benefits as a term for use of solar energy and says it has multifaceted uses.
Thirdly, the article states that the cost of solar energy is very low. After installing solar panels also the life span of the of the panel is so much that the entire money invested is worth utilizing. The professor in the lecture supports this point by mentioning that it is the biggest benefit. He adds that some people install solar panels and they have access energy produced and end of selling extra energy to other sources.
In all, the crux of the passage and the lecture remains the same. Solar energy is non-renewable source of energy and looks to be world's great ideas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, so, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 304.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04934210526 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59615758251 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440789473684 0.540411800872 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 419.366225166 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9099905986 49.2860985944 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.75 110.228320801 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 21.698381199 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45 7.06452816374 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 4.33554083885 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.493271126301 0.272083759551 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18822984227 0.0996497079465 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133143744201 0.0662205650399 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333684485963 0.162205337803 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735470024786 0.0443174109184 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.3589403974 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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