Altruism
The article and lecture both are about a concept called Altruism.While the passage shows that the altruism is a kind act done by both humans and some other mammals , the lecturer posess different opinion about it.
Firstly, the article mention about the selfless act done by humans such as sharing food to strangers or donating body organs to one needed. This specific argument is challenged by the lecture stating that the doners gets appreciation from society and from the reciever. Donating organs would be such a non materialistic act.
Secondly, the article states about the behaviour of a mammal known as "Meerkat". It mention that an individual meerkat would sacrifice food or even his life to assist the other members of group.The lecture, however rebutes this by mentioning a fact from recent study about meerats that the one watch guard meerat eats before stand guard duty.
Finally, the author posists that if the sentinel meerkat sees a predator, it would alarm the group by giving an alarm cry which will alert message to other members of meerkat to run and seek for shelter. In contract, the lecture points out that the sentinel meerkat when detact a predator ,it would be the first one to run and the alarm cry would be make other meerkats gather to each other, which would be beneficial for the predator to catch prey.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
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Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 228.0 270.72406181 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93421052632 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60292779752 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570175438596 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.1345804507 49.2860985944 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.625 110.228320801 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 21.698381199 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06452816374 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0737774904771 0.272083759551 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319348009885 0.0996497079465 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084491541584 0.0662205650399 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063869601977 0.162205337803 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110625395683 0.0443174109184 250% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.3589403974 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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