Animal Extinction
Human population is growing with an unbelieveably fast rate. Nowadays, human being takes up more space for building homes and cities which causes great amounts of pollution in the habitats of all animal species. In other words, humans are now responsible for causing changes in the environment that hurt animals and plant species. Some human activities such as illegal hunting, cutting down trees, etc. take resources and habitats from plants and animals. In fact, human activity often changes or destroys the habitats that plants and animals need to survive. On the other hand, some people believe it is more important to pay attention to human needs than to endangered animals.
Humans have drastically increased the rate of endangered species’ extinction through their roles in deforestation. In other words, deforestation causes big changes in the ecosystem. In fact, it took a lot of time for all animal species to adjust themselves to the ecosystem and their habitats. Besides, these rapid changes in the ecosystem caused by humans are not in proportion with the adjustment rate of animals to these massive and destructive conversions. As a consequence, more species which have an important role in the ecosystem will disappear.
Some people think extinction is a normal phenomenon which has been occurring in nature since a billion years ago. However, some animals are endangered because of a combination of natural and man-made causes. This type of extinction is much more critical compared to natural extinction. As an illustration, if human beings’ exigencies have negative effects on the ecosystem of bees, the side effects of this extinction are beyond belief. In other words, it is true that the extinction of bees would mean the end of humanity. As a result, an imbalance in nature and human needs will cause the extinction of human beings.
In conclusion, some people think human being’s exigencies such as farming, housing, etc. are more important than saving endangered species. Conversely, we must think ahead and have respect for nature’s rules. Remember, the extinction of an apparently annoying insect such as the honeybee will cause the extinction of us.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, conversely, however, if, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 30.3222958057 162% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 5.01324503311 419% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1373.03311258 135% => OK
No of words: 349.0 270.72406181 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32091690544 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91392600634 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507163323782 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.0 419.366225166 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1625967791 49.2860985944 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4090909091 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8636363636 21.698381199 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.40909090909 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259343479444 0.272083759551 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749307247923 0.0996497079465 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680335398851 0.0662205650399 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168450891549 0.162205337803 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766896778636 0.0443174109184 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 63.6247240618 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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