The article discusses the disadvantages of low wages. It also claims that minimum wages are effecting on businesses. In the lecture, however, the professor challenges these claims.
The first point that the article makes is that minimum wages are affecting on small businesses mainly because not all businesses can afford to pay that amount of money. The professor, however, says that small businesses actually can afford to workers with low wages mainly because it’s not too expansive for them.
The second point that the article makes is that some companies move to another countries and if the country does not have minimum wage laws than it can affect on the country mainly because companies will give lower wages to their workers. But, the professor argues by saying that each company gives a certain amount of wage to it’s workers. And she also adds that usually companies don’t move to countries which require high costs for living.
Finally, the article suggests that the minimum wage encourages companies to purchase machines to replace human workers mainly because sometimes it’s costs less. However, the professor suggests that low wages have nothing to do with low workers and that companies will always buy machines. Therefore, the professor adds that law wages does not affect the countries in a negative way.
The article discusses the disadvantages of low wages. It also claims that minimum wages are effecting on businesses. In the lecture, however, the professor challenges these claims.
The first point that the article makes is that minimum wages are affecting on small businesses mainly because not all businesses can afford to pay that amount of money. The professor, however, says that small businesses actually can afford to workers with low wages mainly because it’s not too expansive for them.
The second point that the article makes is that some companies move to another countries and if the country does not have minimum wage laws than it can affect on the country mainly because companies will give lower wages to their workers. But, the professor argues by saying that each company gives a certain amount of wage to it’s workers. And she also adds that usually companies don’t move to countries which require high costs for living.
Finally, the article suggests that the minimum wage encourages companies to purchase machines to replace human workers mainly because sometimes it’s costs less. However, the professor suggests that low wages have nothing to do with low workers and that companies will always buy machines. Therefore, the professor adds that law wages does not affect the countries in a negative way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...'s not too expansive for them. The second point that the article makes is ...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... not have minimum wage laws than it can affect on the country mainly because companies wi...
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Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es which require high costs for living. Finally, the article suggests that the m...
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Line 6, column 370, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...law wages does not affect the countries in a negative way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 216.0 270.72406181 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26388888889 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46796606166 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 145.348785872 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49537037037 0.540411800872 92% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 419.366225166 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3912736238 49.2860985944 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.363636364 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43477372796 0.272083759551 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202700326698 0.0996497079465 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131393856404 0.0662205650399 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.360472578517 0.162205337803 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.273974181367 0.0443174109184 618% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.3589403974 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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