Asteroids are large space objects made of rock and ice. There are hundreds of thousands of asteroids in our solar system. Though we often hear ideas about establishing colonies of humans to live and work on our Moon or our neighboring planet, Mars, some think that sending people to an asteroid would actually be the best colonization option for a number of reasons.
Low Gravity
To begin with, asteroids are often much smaller than planets, so they have lower gravity. When landing a spaceship, the craft would not be pulled as strongly or as forcefully toward the asteroid's surface, making the landing safer than landing on the Moon or Mars; it would also allow a spacecraft to carry much more equipment needed to set up the colony. It would also be easier for the spacecraft to take off again, so the spaceship would need to carry considerably less fuel for the trip back to Earth.
Mining Valuable Metals
Next some asteroids are rich in valuable elements and precious metals that are relatively rare on Earth, such as gold and platinum. An asteroid colony would be extremely profitable and a good source of these raw materials. The colonists or businesses sponsoring them could more than pay for the cost of their support by mining minerals and sending them back to Earth.
Easy to Reach
Finally, asteroids are a good option for colonization because some of them would be very easy to reach. There are a number of asteroids that periodically come within or near Earth's orbit Some of them actually get closer to Earth than our Moon. So these asteroids would be much easier and more affordable to get to and get back from than a planet like Mars, which would require a two-year trip in each direction.
The reading and lecture are both about the colonization of the asteroids. The author of the reading presents, three theories supporting the idea that, the asteroids are more feasible for the colonization, as compared to the planets like Mars and satellite like Moon. The lecturer dispute the claims made in the article. His position is that, they are all incorrect.
According to the reading, the gravity of the asteroids are less as compared to Mars and Moon, thus less pull is exerted by the spacecraft during the landing process, making the landing more safer. The article mentions that, it will be relatively easy for aircraft to take off, due to less fuel consumption The lecturer challenged this specific claims made in the article. He claims that, low gravity causes the decrease in the muscle mass and also signification amount of reduction of bone density, which presents serious health hazard to colonizers. Additionally, he points out that, long term exposure to the low gravity exacerbates the health condition.
Secondly, the article suggest, asteroids are rich is rare and valuable materials, thus making it profitable source for mining the raw materials required in the Earth. The lecturer however asserts that, the cost of funding the support of the colony in asteroid and transport of the mined materials are significantly high, reducing the profit margin. She goes on to say that, if the large quantity of rare metals are minded and transported, it will fluctuate the supply and demand value, making it readily available will only cause the value of such rare metals to decrease, lowering the price.
Finally, the author posits that, asteroids are each to reach to, they periodically gets closer to the Earth orbit as compared to the Mars and Moon. The author contends that, since asteroids are easy to get in and get out from, making it feasible for colonization. In contrast, the lecturer stance is even though the asteroids comes closure to the Earth, it eventually goes farther away, as a result, getting back from the asteroids to Earth is challenging, thus making it not so viable option for the colonization.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nets like Mars and satellite like Moon. The lecturer dispute the claims made in the...
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Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'disputes'.
Suggestion: disputes
...s and satellite like Moon. The lecturer dispute the claims made in the article. His pos...
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Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
..., the gravity of the asteroids are less as compared to Mars and Moon, thus less pu...
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Line 2, column 186, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
...the landing process, making the landing more safer. The article mentions that, it will be ...
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Line 4, column 84, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
...are each to reach to, they periodically gets closer to the Earth orbit as compared t...
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Line 4, column 316, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'asteroids'' or 'asteroid's'?
Suggestion: asteroids'; asteroid's
... the lecturer stance is even though the asteroids comes closure to the Earth, it eventual...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1373.03311258 130% => OK
No of words: 353.0 270.72406181 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05949008499 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69009369681 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521246458924 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 419.366225166 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6226551559 49.2860985944 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.571428571 110.228320801 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 21.698381199 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06452816374 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115758987843 0.272083759551 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423460126726 0.0996497079465 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340824616336 0.0662205650399 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748606627982 0.162205337803 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272172336947 0.0443174109184 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.8541721854 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 63.6247240618 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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