The Battle Against Malaria
Malaria is a dangerous and serious health problem. It occurs mostly in tropical and subtropical parts of the world, including Africa, America, South America, Central America, Asia and many different places. The country which is mostly affected by Malaria is Africa. 60% of Malaria cases and 90% of death cases are in Africa south of Sahara Desert. Even though the causes of this deathful sickness have been understood in this region, international agencies are accurately and intensely working hard to find any solution for this illness. They have mentioned that controlling this life destroyable sickness is a difficult task.
As a cycle, the Malaria is passed from a mosquito to people and from people to mosquito. This events repeat over and over. The malaria cycle begins with tiny parasites which are the most leading agents of malaria into the humans’ body. The parasites are living in the Anopheles mosquitoes. These deadly parasites cause malaria. When a female Anopheles bites a human, the parasites carry into the body of human and subsequently diminish the blood. It also leaves the malaria parasites in the human’s skin. These parasites quickly multiply inside the body of the human and cause individual to feel sick. There, if another mosquito bites the infected human, parasites from the influenced one enter the body of mosquito. When the mosquito bites another one, it adversely effects the healthy individuals and causes them to feel sick. In the malaria cycle, mosquitoes enter the parasites in humans’ body and vice versa the humans give parasites to mosquitoes.
Becoming infected with malaria is a medical emergency. The primary signs and symptoms of malaria are fever, chills, intense headache, and muscle pains. Nausea and vomiting often accompany these symptoms. Immediate medical treatments must be a priority for infected people. Individuals must take medicines which kills the parasites. If they take action soon enough, they will be cured as soon as possible. If not, malaria will cause lots of aberrant and deathful illnesses or even death.
There are two ways to control the malaria in tropical areas. First, it can be controlled by killing the parasites living in humans’ body. If the infected people quickly take malaria medicines, they will deactivate the parasites as soon as possible, and will get healthy only after a few days. Mosquitoes cannot get the parasites from healthy people, so they would not spread. Unfortunately, most people are living in villages and do not have access to medical care. Malaria can be controlled by stopping mosquitoes. One way to control mosquito is to get rid of pools where they lay their eggs. Also, insecticides can be sprayed in wet places to kill and diminish the activity of mosquitoes. Finally, mosquitoes can be controlled by getting rid of pools where the lay eggs, spraying insecticides around wet places and using bed nets. Bed nets can also be sprayed by insecticides and draws off the mosquitoes.
Finally, most individuals are troubling with deadly sickness which is called malaria in many places of the world. This illness is created by a female mosquito by the name of Anopheles. It enters the tiny parasites into the body of humans and humans give parasites to mosquitoes back. Using medical cures can rescue the infected people. Therefore, utilizing general methods such as spraying insecticides in wet places, destroying pollutant pools where the put their eggs and using sprayed bet nets can also accurate methods to prevent getting sick with malaria.
Written by Masoum Saie
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 10.4613686534 239% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 5.04856512141 297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 7.30242825607 315% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 30.3222958057 224% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3021.0 1373.03311258 220% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 579.0 270.72406181 214% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21761658031 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90534594407 4.04702891845 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66901692452 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 145.348785872 178% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445595854922 0.540411800872 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 962.1 419.366225166 229% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 3.25607064018 369% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 1.25165562914 639% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 40.0 13.0662251656 306% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4403185316 49.2860985944 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.525 110.228320801 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.475 21.698381199 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 7.06452816374 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 20.0 4.45695364238 449% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.27373068433 398% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135134733747 0.272083759551 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451630552215 0.0996497079465 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588966833759 0.0662205650399 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722471953122 0.162205337803 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366088500622 0.0443174109184 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.3589403974 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 63.6247240618 206% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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